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Khe Iem
03-10-2008, 10:24 PM
Khe Iem

CROSSING

bite off a piece of sorrow to make snakes and dragons

flirt

to coax
each other across

the splendid river distinguished by the afternoon’s southeasterly winds

lucidnightmares
03-10-2008, 10:38 PM
so short, so much to read.
the first line seems to be how we create anger, and aggression from our own sorrow.
it`s wonderful to read, and i get a beautiful scene in my head when i do read it.
the last line is my favorite, that`s where the image is strongest in my mind.
it`s like a wonderful dream.

Khe Iem
03-13-2008, 11:40 PM
Thank you so much for reading. Khe Iem