Why?

[lucidnightmares]

I`ll twist your mind
unscrew reality
to find you blind
lost mentality

faceless facade
behind your smile
"i`m afraid...
i`m hostile..."

fear yourself
look away
scar yourself
lose today

it`ll all be gone
in just a moment
you know it`s wrong
it`s what you resent

why?

you know your beautiful
you know your right

i know your lonely
i seen your eyes
reflecting glass
empty skies

so let me show you
something beautiful
what we never knew...

[ShadowFire]

i know your lonely
i seen your eyes
reflecting glass
empty skies


This is wonderful ....but the part above speaks the most to me...I am lonely and many can see it through me eyes. Eyes are the windows to the inside. I do wish though to see something beautiful...then I look out the window...or at a innocent child....and it brings joy to my heart. I wanted to tell you though that I really like this poem...I also like much of your others as well.

[lucidnightmares]

thank you very much:)
alot of people now seem to be lonely, maybe it`s the world we created, maybe the media, but everyone seems to be alone.
i know this because i guess i`m alone too, allways was in a way, but the important thing is, as you said,

"...then I look out the window...or at a innocent child....and it brings joy to my heart."

well spoken, i`m eager to see some poems from you, you have a better way with words than i do, so i would be thrilled to read some of your creativity at work.

[ShadowFire]

No thank you for expressing in such poetry. I have several poems I would like to post but I am choosing which ones. I tend to be a darker poet. But I definately enjoy your poetry. My world is not lonely during the day when I have friends around...but in the black of night as I lie alone in bed and ponder on life...the loneliness creeps and consumes me. I then slowly fall to the land of dreams to wake to the light of the morning sun. What a blessing for a new day.

[Tarquin]

this is very beautiful.
'fear yourself look away scar yourself lose today' i really liked this part, you do lose today, and everyday, because when you fear yourself you fear everything, reality itself...anyway thank you, it was lovely.