View Full Version : Poetry, one word at a time
Jester
11-02-2004, 04:37 PM
Here's an idea... why dont we create a work of art by simply one word at a time... so one person starts and another jsut comes up with the next word.
I'll start with,
You
Scheherazade
11-02-2004, 06:47 PM
You
unfold
Eric, son of Chuck
11-03-2004, 08:24 AM
You unfold its
Scheherazade
11-03-2004, 09:48 AM
You unfold its darkness
Isagel
11-03-2004, 11:57 AM
You unfold its darkness
gently
Monica
11-03-2004, 12:14 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so
Jester
11-03-2004, 03:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that
Taliesin
11-03-2004, 03:24 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my
Jester
11-03-2004, 03:44 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind
Isagel
11-03-2004, 04:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will
Taliesin
11-03-2004, 04:45 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
Eric, son of Chuck
11-03-2004, 05:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow
Jester
11-03-2004, 05:20 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in
seeker
11-03-2004, 07:31 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its
Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 03:17 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown
Eric, son of Chuck
11-04-2004, 04:37 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
(is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)
Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 05:46 AM
Maybe those who are adding the last word, or who just has, can do the punctuation depending on their take?
Jester
11-04-2004, 05:03 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song
(i have no clue anyone want to volunteer to punctuate this poem?)
kushi
11-04-2004, 06:39 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song swiftly
amuse
11-04-2004, 06:41 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
wafting -
*oops! same time oh no*
Jester
11-04-2004, 06:42 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely
(there incorporate teh two)
kushi
11-04-2004, 06:47 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling
Jester
11-04-2004, 06:52 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 08:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the
Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 08:15 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss
Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 08:28 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
subterranean
11-04-2004, 08:29 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatros
Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 08:32 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted
seeker
11-04-2004, 09:52 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond
Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 10:07 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the
Jester
11-04-2004, 10:29 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great
Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 10:42 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
amuse
11-04-2004, 11:28 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought
Jester
11-05-2004, 12:42 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to
kushi
11-05-2004, 02:12 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive
Scheherazade
11-05-2004, 11:44 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while
Jester
11-05-2004, 03:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you
Scheherazade
11-05-2004, 03:25 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously
subterranean
11-06-2004, 02:39 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide
Ceahorse
11-06-2004, 02:57 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Jester
11-06-2004, 03:00 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh
Monica
11-06-2004, 03:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there
Jilla
11-06-2004, 04:51 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase
Scheherazade
11-06-2004, 05:36 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh
Bongitybongbong
11-06-2004, 07:35 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life
Jester
11-06-2004, 09:13 PM
welcome bongitybongbong, I love your name.... :banana:
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my
Jilla
11-07-2004, 06:06 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Scheherazade
11-07-2004, 07:49 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh
Adger Ellen Poe
11-07-2004, 08:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child
Jester
11-07-2004, 08:53 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of
(I liek how this is turning out, it worked out well wouldn't you say?) :nod:
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
(someone should do the punctuation, lol, begins to look ... weird without comas)
Scheherazade
11-08-2004, 08:09 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is
Scheherazade
11-08-2004, 08:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one
Taliesin
11-08-2004, 10:28 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who
kushi
11-08-2004, 12:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought
Jester
11-08-2004, 03:32 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to
Scheherazade
11-08-2004, 04:16 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath
Jester
11-08-2004, 05:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy
Bongitybongbong
11-09-2004, 07:57 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of
Bongitybongbong
11-09-2004, 05:34 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding
Jester
11-09-2004, 06:47 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love
kushi
11-09-2004, 06:50 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love
Tell
Jester
11-09-2004, 06:58 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me
Scheherazade
11-09-2004, 07:33 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell
kushi
11-09-2004, 07:49 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me
Jester
11-09-2004, 11:17 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What
kushi
11-10-2004, 12:34 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
Helga
11-10-2004, 01:42 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you
kushi
11-10-2004, 03:35 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
Helga
11-10-2004, 03:46 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide
kushi
11-10-2004, 03:52 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
Helga
11-10-2004, 03:55 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your
Bongitybongbong
11-10-2004, 05:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul
Jester
11-10-2004, 05:24 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell
Scheherazade
11-10-2004, 05:51 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me,
Jester
11-10-2004, 06:19 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell
Scheherazade
11-10-2004, 06:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, tell me!
Jester
11-10-2004, 06:33 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What
Scheherazade
11-10-2004, 06:35 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises
kushi
11-11-2004, 12:45 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have
Jester
11-11-2004, 01:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been
amuse
11-11-2004, 01:49 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
subterranean
11-11-2004, 04:55 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Bongitybongbong
11-11-2004, 07:49 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why
Jester
11-11-2004, 06:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are
kushi
11-12-2004, 02:54 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds
Jester
11-12-2004, 05:40 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so
Bongitybongbong
11-12-2004, 07:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious
kushi
11-13-2004, 12:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when
Jester
11-13-2004, 01:04 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you
kushi
11-13-2004, 03:57 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
Jester
11-13-2004, 04:26 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside
Jester
11-13-2004, 09:00 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the
Taliesin
11-14-2004, 05:40 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
Helga
11-14-2004, 03:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you
Jester
11-14-2004, 06:10 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring
Bongitybongbong
11-14-2004, 06:20 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without
Helga
11-15-2004, 04:02 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without joy
Bongitybongbong
11-15-2004, 04:22 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful
Jester
11-15-2004, 06:00 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annhilation
(might have spelt that wrong, if i did feel free to fix it.)
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of
kushi
11-16-2004, 04:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
Jester
11-16-2004, 04:29 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions
(spelling ???)
kushi
11-18-2004, 03:11 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
Helga
11-19-2004, 05:39 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside
Jester
11-20-2004, 01:00 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Helga
11-20-2004, 06:46 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Jester
11-20-2004, 05:10 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Helga
11-25-2004, 02:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness
kushi
11-25-2004, 02:37 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
Helga
11-28-2004, 03:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me
Jester
11-28-2004, 05:02 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you
kushi
11-29-2004, 07:37 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
subterranean
11-29-2004, 08:25 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers
Jester
11-29-2004, 10:15 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to
Bongitybongbong
11-29-2004, 10:19 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies
Jester, how do you think this is going?
kushi
11-30-2004, 01:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
subterranean
11-30-2004, 05:45 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
Helga
11-30-2004, 07:06 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different
Jester
11-30-2004, 06:19 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
subterranean
11-30-2004, 07:24 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away
Jester
11-30-2004, 10:06 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
subterranean
11-30-2004, 10:38 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me peace
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I
kushi
12-01-2004, 11:02 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall
Bongitybongbong
12-01-2004, 04:37 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
Jester
12-02-2004, 06:28 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone
Bongitybongbong
12-02-2004, 07:12 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until
Bongitybongbong
12-02-2004, 07:12 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life
kushi
12-03-2004, 11:19 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
Jester
12-03-2004, 06:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
Helga
12-04-2004, 03:50 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong
Jester
12-04-2004, 06:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
Helga
12-05-2004, 05:20 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears
Bongitybongbong
12-05-2004, 08:17 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears torture
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears, torture is
Jester
12-06-2004, 03:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears, torture is
forever
That's an end? I mean... it looks it, lol. If it is could we start a new thread? Like maybe... Stanza 2 ;)
Jester
12-07-2004, 05:02 PM
sure.... (ill start it again)
subterranean
12-10-2004, 06:57 AM
What..the end already? at 152th post...???
Go looky for a thread called Stanza 2 ;)
Ok, here, lol: http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3508
subterranean
12-13-2004, 05:48 AM
But Jay, it was only reached 152th post...too short
I know what you mean, but reading the 'end',
disapears, torture is
forever
it looked like an end (well, to me), and I only suggested that perhaps it COULD be the end, it's not the lenght that matters (take haiku for example), and well, no one said you couldn't continue with this one (but we ARE continuing it, just in another thread and you need to copy/paste less text, makes it more... 'in one piece', sorry, can't remember the word)
Hey, in the end, when there's like... 10? ;) threads (10 stanzas), we could... ok, you (as you like your poems LONG :p) could put them together in one loooong poem (just like the alt. haiku compiled thread).
Still angry with me?
Jester
12-13-2004, 08:05 PM
so what are your interpretations of stanza one? there probably hundreds
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