to the sky......

[ahsiam]

she held the fear of the rain
held the passion of heaven
dazzling light of sun
and soft dim light of the moon


she was weary and worn
her pale face
expressed her deep agony
told the truth unspoken-
she has no limit of her boundary
but has no existence.....
she starts from a void
and ends in there

[PrinceMyshkin]

What a wonderful piece of metaphysical contemplaton! I especially like the line:



told the truth unspoken-

[symphony]

I'm always mad about your last lines.
Here, too, those last 2 lines were my favorite!

[ahsiam]

What a wonderful piece of metaphysical contemplaton! I especially like the line:

thank you prince.:D
thats one of my favourite line too. i am very glad that you liked it.:D

[ahsiam]

I'm always mad about your last lines.
Here, too, those last 2 lines were my favorite!

yeh. i think i should just write last two lines and last two lines and last two lines...then you will like my whole poem...how 'bout that?! :p