Defenders og the World

[indygirl63]

Defenders of the world are dying away
Slower to faster more lives lay
by death in this world, it tears us apart
farther and farther each day and each thought
more lives taken each day and each night
just the thought of that sight, makes us uprise in fright
as our defenders wither away
there will be nothing left to say.

What do you think?

[indygirl63]

Defenders of the world are dying away
Slower to faster more lives lay
by death in this world, it tears us apart
farther and farther each day and each thought
more lives taken each day and each night
just the thought of that sight, makes us uprise in fright
as our defenders wither away
there will be nothing left to say.

What do you think?

[Mutatis-Mutandis]

Interesting. I like it. Reminds me of something a could have written a few years ago, but definately not something I would have written as young as 15. Keep it up, you have a talent.