war what is it good for

[hasslehoffskid]

Boys with thier toys
Hot like the sun
They'll burn you bad
Have you starin down the barrel of a gun
These thoughtless kids
They lack the thought
Life is thier game
It's all they've got
Accumulate
There's always more to own
As if the truth has never been shown
Death is thier profit
It's one in the same
Beware of these children playing this game

[lucidnightmares]

the mindlessness that is war, men who are nothing more than children with power toying with the world for there amusement.
theres not much to say on my part
it contained your thoughts well
but i felt something was missing, i don`t know what exactly.
however it was enjoyable and with some work i think it could be beautiful.
i haven`t read a poem like this in a little while, so it was refreshing
thanks