Always To Late

[Cassandra1]

It has always been my fate,
To be a friend, never the mate,
So, I pass through life's broad gates,
Always alone, always too late......

[PrinceMyshkin]

Sad though this seems, I salute you for the epigrammatic quality of it!

But do consider making these minor grammatic changes:


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It has always been my fate,
To be a friend, never the mate,
So, I pass through life's broad gates,
Always alone, always too late......

[Cassandra1]

Thank you for your kindness, Prince. I am new to this...

[Pendragon]

We don't see many of these styled poems and it's a shame, really, because they say so much with so little wording. A beautiful use of language! Well done! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Appaluse.gif

[Cassandra1]

Thank you Pendragon... I may try another one day... :) Cassandra1

[Mutatis-Mutandis]

I like it. I can relate to it.