dibyendra
02-26-2008, 08:01 AM
Sleeping with the ghost (Final edit, some modification into the third version)
Please provide your feedback regarding this final edit.
Talk.
“I won’t.”
Please, I insist.
“But, talk is cheap.”
Silence is not the cure.
"What would you like to hear?"
Open your eyes. See the real world.
"It is chaotic. I'd rather close my eyes."
Trust me. Life is full of surprises. It’s colourful.
“So are my dreams. Please leave me alone to ponder.”
Your attitude has changed. What on this Earth transfigured your perspective?
“Life is not a stagnant pool but a streaming river. There is a vast ocean to meet.”
But, you seem feeble. Look at yourself in the mirror. Please, take a look at yourself.
“Yes, I’m frail child now. All my heroes have died. I can’t face the mirror. It’s such a pathetic!”
Fear not. Stand up and be strong. Heroes never die. Follow their footsteps, path, and their imprints.
“Right, but I want something else - Nirvana. I’ve unshackled my mind to wander into this world and this Universe.”
Why so? Is this because this world is full of turmoil? Something is wrong with you. God, enlighten this young fellow.
"I admit that. Look at these damn politicians and systems. God, please send some saviours down into the Earth."
Seek for a true company who can understand you. I can't see you getting senseless like a lunatic.
"Why I love myself more? I don't know why. But, this is not what I used to be. I'm not crazy."
Why don't you fall in love to whom you love heartily? True love will definitely succeed.
"It hurts. Now, I can't handle the pangs of love anymore. I want to break free."
How can you judge these kind of sentiments? I see the truth in your eyes.
"Some are learned from seeing and much from experiencing this life."
Have some optimism. All you need is change in your perspective.
"I'm not a pessimist. I'm just a victim of circumstances."
Go faraway places. The natural sceneries are grand.
"So are my imaginations and my visualizations."
Look at the bright sides. Life is a long road.
"Oh, forgive me for my blurry visionary."
Everything will be alright. Calm down.
"I know that. Nothing lasts forever."
Sleep and forget your existence.
"Yes, let me be non-existent."
Turn off the lights now.
"I'm alone. I'm afraid"
You are not alone.
"Who are you?"
I am you.
Soul
...
..
.
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Old versions
Sleeping with the ghost (Second Draft)
Talk.
“I won’t.”
Please, I insist.
“But, talk is cheap.”
Silence is not the cure.
"What would you like to hear?"
Open your eyes. See the real world.
"It is chaotic. I'd rather close my eyes."
Trust me. Life is full of surprises. It’s colourful.
“So are my dreams. Please leave me alone to ponder.”
Such a radical change, this is not what you used to be. Isn’t it?
“Yes, life is not a stagnant pool but a river. There’s an ocean to meet.”
But you seem feeble. Look at yourself in the mirror. Breathe easy, and look.
“Yes, I’m frail child now. All my heroes died. I can’t face the mirror. It’s horrible!”
Fear not. Stand up and be strong. Heroes never die. Follow their footsteps, path, and their imprints.
“Right, but I want something else - Nirvana. I’ve unshackled my mind to wander this world and this Universe.”
Why? Is this because this world is full of turmoil? Something is wrong with you. God, enlighten this young fellow.
"I admit that. What about the damn politicians and damn governments? God, please send some saviours here."
Seek for a true company to whom you can share all your deep feelings. Please, I cannot see you being fatigued.
"I love myself more than others. I’m really sorry. I need a change. But, this is not what I used to be."
Please fall in love with someone you find interesting and you will relish this life.
"It hurts. I've learned lessons. Please, I don't want the pang of love anymore."
How did you know all these things? You seemed to be hurt by this life badly.
"Because I've lived this life and I've been through different stages of life."
Be optimistic. Life is really a long road. Need a change in your persona.
"Na, I'm not a pessimist. I'm just a victim of circumstances. Trust me."
Wipe out your tears. Worry is such a waste of time. You hear me?
"Let the gravity suck these salty drops as much as it can. Hah!"
Try Smiling. This world will follow you. Don’t waste this life.
"I knew, this world is selfish too. I'm not the only one."
Go faraway places. The natural sceneries are grand.
"So are my imaginations and so are my thoughts."
Look at the bright sides. Let them prosper.
"Oh, forgive me for my blurry visionary."
Everything will be okay. Calm down.
"I know that nothing lasts forever."
Sleep and forget that you exist.
"Yes, let me be non-existent."
Turn off the lights now.
"I'm afraid. I'm alone."
No you are not.
"Who are you?"
I am you.
Soul
...
..
.
Sleeping with the ghost (First Draft)
Talk.
“No. I won’t.”
Please, I insist.
“No, talk is cheap.”
Silence leads you to nowhere.
“What would you like to hear?”
Open your eyes. See the real world.
“Real world is full of turmoil. I’d rather close my eyes.”
Something is wrong with you. This is not what you were previously.
“I admit that. But, what about the damn politicians and this government? God, please send some saviours here.”
Seek for a true company to who you can share all your tantrums. Please, I cannot see you being fatigued.
“Ha, I love myself. I’m selfish. I don’t feel sorry. But, this is not what I used to be.”
Then, fall in love with someone you find interesting and you’ll relish this life.
“It hurts. I’ve learned lessons. Please, I don’t want the pang of love anymore.”
How do you know that all these things? You seemed to be hurt by this life.
“I’ve seen what this life brings and I’ve been through everything.”
Be optimistic. Life is a long road. You need a change in your persona.
“I’m not a pessimist. I’m just a victim of circumstances. Trust me.”
Wipe out your tears and open your eyes. I insist you that please.
“No, let the gravity suck this salty drops as much as it can.”
Smile, this world will surely follow you. Run for your life.
“I know this world is selfish too. I’m not the only one.”
Go faraway places. The natural sceneries are splendid.
“So are my imaginations and so are my visualizations.”
Look at the bright sides. There are still hopes.
“Please, forgive me for my blurry visionary.”
Everything will be okay. Please calm down.
“I know that nothing lasts forever.”
Sleep. Forget that you exist…
“Yes, let me be non-existent.”
Turn off the lights now.
“I’m afraid. I’m alone.”
No you are not.
“Who are you?”
Your soul,
& life
…
..
.
Please provide your feedback regarding this final edit.
Talk.
“I won’t.”
Please, I insist.
“But, talk is cheap.”
Silence is not the cure.
"What would you like to hear?"
Open your eyes. See the real world.
"It is chaotic. I'd rather close my eyes."
Trust me. Life is full of surprises. It’s colourful.
“So are my dreams. Please leave me alone to ponder.”
Your attitude has changed. What on this Earth transfigured your perspective?
“Life is not a stagnant pool but a streaming river. There is a vast ocean to meet.”
But, you seem feeble. Look at yourself in the mirror. Please, take a look at yourself.
“Yes, I’m frail child now. All my heroes have died. I can’t face the mirror. It’s such a pathetic!”
Fear not. Stand up and be strong. Heroes never die. Follow their footsteps, path, and their imprints.
“Right, but I want something else - Nirvana. I’ve unshackled my mind to wander into this world and this Universe.”
Why so? Is this because this world is full of turmoil? Something is wrong with you. God, enlighten this young fellow.
"I admit that. Look at these damn politicians and systems. God, please send some saviours down into the Earth."
Seek for a true company who can understand you. I can't see you getting senseless like a lunatic.
"Why I love myself more? I don't know why. But, this is not what I used to be. I'm not crazy."
Why don't you fall in love to whom you love heartily? True love will definitely succeed.
"It hurts. Now, I can't handle the pangs of love anymore. I want to break free."
How can you judge these kind of sentiments? I see the truth in your eyes.
"Some are learned from seeing and much from experiencing this life."
Have some optimism. All you need is change in your perspective.
"I'm not a pessimist. I'm just a victim of circumstances."
Go faraway places. The natural sceneries are grand.
"So are my imaginations and my visualizations."
Look at the bright sides. Life is a long road.
"Oh, forgive me for my blurry visionary."
Everything will be alright. Calm down.
"I know that. Nothing lasts forever."
Sleep and forget your existence.
"Yes, let me be non-existent."
Turn off the lights now.
"I'm alone. I'm afraid"
You are not alone.
"Who are you?"
I am you.
Soul
...
..
.
=================================================
Old versions
Sleeping with the ghost (Second Draft)
Talk.
“I won’t.”
Please, I insist.
“But, talk is cheap.”
Silence is not the cure.
"What would you like to hear?"
Open your eyes. See the real world.
"It is chaotic. I'd rather close my eyes."
Trust me. Life is full of surprises. It’s colourful.
“So are my dreams. Please leave me alone to ponder.”
Such a radical change, this is not what you used to be. Isn’t it?
“Yes, life is not a stagnant pool but a river. There’s an ocean to meet.”
But you seem feeble. Look at yourself in the mirror. Breathe easy, and look.
“Yes, I’m frail child now. All my heroes died. I can’t face the mirror. It’s horrible!”
Fear not. Stand up and be strong. Heroes never die. Follow their footsteps, path, and their imprints.
“Right, but I want something else - Nirvana. I’ve unshackled my mind to wander this world and this Universe.”
Why? Is this because this world is full of turmoil? Something is wrong with you. God, enlighten this young fellow.
"I admit that. What about the damn politicians and damn governments? God, please send some saviours here."
Seek for a true company to whom you can share all your deep feelings. Please, I cannot see you being fatigued.
"I love myself more than others. I’m really sorry. I need a change. But, this is not what I used to be."
Please fall in love with someone you find interesting and you will relish this life.
"It hurts. I've learned lessons. Please, I don't want the pang of love anymore."
How did you know all these things? You seemed to be hurt by this life badly.
"Because I've lived this life and I've been through different stages of life."
Be optimistic. Life is really a long road. Need a change in your persona.
"Na, I'm not a pessimist. I'm just a victim of circumstances. Trust me."
Wipe out your tears. Worry is such a waste of time. You hear me?
"Let the gravity suck these salty drops as much as it can. Hah!"
Try Smiling. This world will follow you. Don’t waste this life.
"I knew, this world is selfish too. I'm not the only one."
Go faraway places. The natural sceneries are grand.
"So are my imaginations and so are my thoughts."
Look at the bright sides. Let them prosper.
"Oh, forgive me for my blurry visionary."
Everything will be okay. Calm down.
"I know that nothing lasts forever."
Sleep and forget that you exist.
"Yes, let me be non-existent."
Turn off the lights now.
"I'm afraid. I'm alone."
No you are not.
"Who are you?"
I am you.
Soul
...
..
.
Sleeping with the ghost (First Draft)
Talk.
“No. I won’t.”
Please, I insist.
“No, talk is cheap.”
Silence leads you to nowhere.
“What would you like to hear?”
Open your eyes. See the real world.
“Real world is full of turmoil. I’d rather close my eyes.”
Something is wrong with you. This is not what you were previously.
“I admit that. But, what about the damn politicians and this government? God, please send some saviours here.”
Seek for a true company to who you can share all your tantrums. Please, I cannot see you being fatigued.
“Ha, I love myself. I’m selfish. I don’t feel sorry. But, this is not what I used to be.”
Then, fall in love with someone you find interesting and you’ll relish this life.
“It hurts. I’ve learned lessons. Please, I don’t want the pang of love anymore.”
How do you know that all these things? You seemed to be hurt by this life.
“I’ve seen what this life brings and I’ve been through everything.”
Be optimistic. Life is a long road. You need a change in your persona.
“I’m not a pessimist. I’m just a victim of circumstances. Trust me.”
Wipe out your tears and open your eyes. I insist you that please.
“No, let the gravity suck this salty drops as much as it can.”
Smile, this world will surely follow you. Run for your life.
“I know this world is selfish too. I’m not the only one.”
Go faraway places. The natural sceneries are splendid.
“So are my imaginations and so are my visualizations.”
Look at the bright sides. There are still hopes.
“Please, forgive me for my blurry visionary.”
Everything will be okay. Please calm down.
“I know that nothing lasts forever.”
Sleep. Forget that you exist…
“Yes, let me be non-existent.”
Turn off the lights now.
“I’m afraid. I’m alone.”
No you are not.
“Who are you?”
Your soul,
& life
…
..
.