after midnite,,

[rocksea]

after midnite
fan is silence
nothing else is talking of silence

moon, half-clad
so distant
to know my feelings
if it was morning
i wud've asked the birds passing by
to pause the chirping for a while
n smile at me
an' here my wail

oh! the curtain has fallen
n itz dark all around

i forget myself
i forget myself

[Jay]

Just a question, do you spell the words the way you do on purpose? If so, why? If not maybe you'd like to check the spelling :)

[rocksea]

u can say like this:
it is not on purpose but it is by nature.
just wanted to write it simply,, the way it comes to my mind..
so that i don't lose the tone..

[Bongitybongbong]

very good poem. very deep in esence. thanks

[Jay]

Cool :), do you have more poems about the moon? It's the best 'star' ever ;):p