A Simple Smile (JS)

[knightss]

A simple smile,
resembling leaves of amber
Luscious in design,
ostentatious eyes
As if a game is played
And I a joker made
For a time, for a while
To lose my
heart
In her smile

And for what reason,
do you suppose
That while the devil lay
behind her eyes
I found a passion I couldn’t break
And I continued on for the sake
That if I my soul give
It is my
heart
That eternally lives

[Virgil]

Wow, Knight that is really good. I love the phrasing. Original yet natural. And the occaissional rhyme really pulls it together. And the rhythm is good too.. Everything about this is excellent!

[knightss]

Thanks Virgil =)