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ampoule
02-14-2008, 03:57 PM
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I really, really, really,
Do like you!!

And here are the Valentines I have done so far. As you will see, it takes a lot of work to get these just right. ;) (Sorry I ran out of time to do one for everyone. I was thinkin' of ya though)

Prince, Prince,
It makes no sense
if U won't B my
Valentine.
Will ya, huh?

Sweets, Sweets,
Nuthin' beats
YOU for a Valentine.

Fire, Fire,
I'll be a crier
if U won't B my
Valentine.
Pretty please?

Fifth, Fifth,
It's no myth,
I want U 4 my
Valentine.

Kiz, Kiz,
You're a whiz
so B my
Valentine.

diby, diby,
I tell no fibby,
I want U 4 my
Valentine.

Pen, Pen,
tell me when
U will B my
Valentine.

Granny, Granny,
Every nook, every cranny,
says U will B my
Valentine.

Mother, Mother,
There's not a 'nuther
like U 4 my
Valentine.

Poppy, Poppy,
Don't make me boppy
you on the head.
B my Valentine.

Symphony, Symphony,
I'll bang on the timpani
if U won't B my
Valentine.

Auntie, Auntie,
I just can't-y
imagine anyone else
2 B my Valentine.

DickZ, DickZ,
I'm gonna picks-y
U 2 B my Valentine.
Okie dokie?

Jon, Jon,
I won't con ya,
B my Valentine.

pensive, pensive,
It will be tense if
U won't B my
Valentine.

Virg, Virg,
All I can do is urge
U 2 B my Valentine.

More to come. I know you can't wait! :lol:

Sweets America
02-14-2008, 04:32 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Funny! But....when I read the Sweets one I thought it meant I was special in your heart, but then I saw all the others... :bawling: :D :p

ampoule
02-15-2008, 09:03 AM
Hi Sweets. I'm glad you read yours. It was all just some silly fun. I made one up for everyone in my choir also. They were so excited, you would have thought they'd won a new car. LOL I guess it proves that everyone likes to be thought of.
I'm sorry I didn't write a poem for everyone here but time got away from me. I think fondly of all of you.

TheFifthElement
02-15-2008, 02:27 PM
Oh:

ampoule, ampoule
you're so cool
I'd love to be your
Valentine

Loved 'em all :)

NikolaiI
02-15-2008, 04:41 PM
that's an awesome poem!!!!!

dibyendra
02-16-2008, 08:53 AM
Dear Amp,
This is so cool while reading ;) . I'm glad to see my name there and thank you for remembering on the day of Valentine Amp. By the way, I couldn't grasp the word 'fibby' which you've written:


diby, diby,
I tell no fibby,
I want U 4 my
Valentine.

For you Amp:

Ampoule,
You're a star,
shining very high, gleaming.
I want to see you tonight in that sky.
Just say "Yes" for me, and I would reach for you.
In that sky, would you love to be my star tonight?
Coz' I want you for my Valentine...
Please...


Love and greetings,
Dibyendra

Gibran
02-16-2008, 09:24 AM
not bad.. I'd rather call it a lyric? ampoule may sing it with guitar playing
after all a valentine is better than a poem anyway :)

ampoule
02-16-2008, 10:36 AM
Dear Amp,
This is so cool while reading ;) . I'm glad to see my name there and thank you for remembering on the day of Valentine Amp. By the way, I couldn't grasp the word 'fibby' which you've written:


You are welcome, and thank you also. That was very nice.
The thing about Valentines is one can take many liberties with the rhyme. I'm not really sure how you pronounce your screen name but I always say 'dibby' so the word 'fibby' is fib (a little lie) made to rhyme. I hope that makes sense.

dibyendra
02-16-2008, 11:35 AM
You are welcome, and thank you also. That was very nice.
The thing about Valentines is one can take many liberties with the rhyme. I'm not really sure how you pronounce your screen name but I always say 'dibby' so the word 'fibby' is fib (a little lie) made to rhyme. I hope that makes sense.

I Got it now Amp :). Thank you again. And I'm glad you liked my piece of poem too. You're the one.