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dibyendra
02-13-2008, 10:53 PM
Cup of love
She poured yet another glass of wine for me,
and asked eagerly with her frowning face
“Let me hear your smouldered feelings. Let them erupt like a volcano,
and I want to watch them sliding like an avalanche.”
I prompted quickly before sipping the wine
“Okay dear, but why don’t you let me drink your love first,
before my feelings gush?”
She rebuffed with tears in her eyes
“But, you've got me wrong! You seemed to be drunk!”
My eyes were glued toward her tears. I couldn't hold my tears as well.
Drops of tears plunged into the cup of wine without sipping them.
In a husky voice, I answered
“Don't get me wrong darling. I only desired for a cup of love.”

Would You?

If you see me crying lonely, with my head on the knees,
would you hold me in your arms to cry on your shoulder?

If I fall from grace in this crazy world,
would you help me revive with a slap and pamper in your loving embrace again?

If I drift like a vagabond, searching for shelter from the storm,
would you let me into your place when I knock your door?

When this life seems downing and colours are fading,
would you help me elevate again with desires, enriched with full of colours?

If you find me staring at the infinite sky in the middle of nowhere,
would you stand by me and hold my hands to take me home?

If this world make a giant leap and laugh at my weakness,
would you still wait for me and tell me that you still love me in despite of my limitations?

Would you…?

kiz_paws
02-14-2008, 01:30 AM
Cup of Love was interesting, I find dialogue in poetry to be a neat tool. Your words spoke of the misunderstanding in such a soft poetic manner, I really enjoyed this poem. :)

Would You? I loved all the conditions that you asked in your poem, this kind of thing always captures my heart. What beautiful words and great ending. I really liked this poem, dibyendra. :thumbs_up

dibyendra
02-14-2008, 07:18 AM
Cup of Love was interesting, I find dialogue in poetry to be a neat tool. Your words spoke of the misunderstanding in such a soft poetic manner, I really enjoyed this poem. :)

Would You? I loved all the conditions that you asked in your poem, this kind of thing always captures my heart. What beautiful words and great ending. I really liked this poem, dibyendra. :thumbs_up

Thank you very much Kiz for your kind comments. You're so kind. Really :).

Lote-Tree
02-14-2008, 11:57 AM
Cup of love
She poured me yet another glass of wine,
and asked eagerly with her frowning face
“Let me hear your smouldered feelings. Let them erupt like a volcano,
and I want to watch them sliding like an avalanche.”
I prompted quickly before sipping wine
“Okay dear, but why don’t you let me drink your love first,
before my feelings gush?”
She rebuffed with tears in her eyes
“But, you've got me wrong! You seemed to be drunk!”
My eyes glued toward her tears. I couldn't hold my tears as well.
Drops of tears plunged into the cup of wine without sipping them.
In a husky voice, I answered
“Don't get me wrong darling. I only desired for a cup of love.”

Would You?

If you see me crying lonely, with my head on the knees,
would you hold me in your arms to cry on your shoulder?

If I fall from grace in this crazy world,
would you help me revive with a slap and pamper in your loving embrace again?

If I drift like a vagabond, searching for shelter from the storm,
would you let me into your place when I knock your door?

When this life seems downing and colours are fading,
would you help me elevate again with desires, enriched with full of colours?

If you find me staring at the infinite sky in the middle of nowhere,
would you stand by me and hold my hands to take me home?

If this world make a giant leap and laugh at my weakness,
would you still wait for me and tell me that you still love me in despite of my limitations?

Would you…?

I love the first one. It is great!

dibyendra
02-14-2008, 10:13 PM
Fragrances on the day of Valentine

Love is in the air –
I could feel the dispersed fragrance of young hearts everywhere.
In their appealing outfits, everyone looks gorgeous in the glamorous sunset.
When the night sky is filled with the twinkling stars,
parks are adorned with the stunning colorful lights.
Couples are dancing sideways holding their drinks,
feeling the warmth of being near to each other,
underneath the twinkling stars and the crescent moon
with their cheek to cheek in a cuddle.
Blend of fragrances made the ambience intoxicating;
Garden of Eden, I assumed,
and piece of Heaven on the Earth, I felt.
Some couples on the bench, being nostalgic,
I assume, they are remembering the time when they first met with each other.
On this day, there should be no lonesome hearts;
they are seeking their luck,
if they could find someone matching on the day of valentine.
But, there in that corner,
I could see a heartbroken young lady with her tear-stained face.
I know she's looking for someone with loving arms in this moment.
There should be no tears tonight;
I approached her and tried to cheer her up.
There's the same story between us;
I would say how my love bloomed
on the last year of this day
and ended so soon before this very day.
But, life moves on dear,
and you might find far better than the one,
who has left you lonely in the vale of tears.
"Dry your eyes," I whispered,
"and bury the past. I know love hurts and it hurts really bad."
Let's talk something enchanting tonight.
But, let's not talk tonight
about the heroism, commitments, despondencies, and uncertainties.
Tonight, how about spending every single moment blissfully
and carry them in the book of memories?



Any good title for this poem? Any comments for this poem would be much appreciated. Thank you.

kiz_paws
02-15-2008, 01:26 PM
I enjoyed your descriptions, I could see the couples in the park.

underneath the twinkling stars and the crescent moon
with their cheek to cheek in a cuddleI thought this was a sweet phrase :nod:

Tonight, how about spending every single moment blissfully
and carry them in the book of memories?Very nice, I liked that a lot. :)

As for a 'good title', that is difficult -- naming a poem is always a chore for me ... Maybe someone else has an idea?

Cheers, dibyendra!

dibyendra
02-16-2008, 08:28 AM
I enjoyed your descriptions, I could see the couples in the park.
I thought this was a sweet phrase :nod:
Very nice, I liked that a lot. :)

As for a 'good title', that is difficult -- naming a poem is always a chore for me ... Maybe someone else has an idea?

Cheers, dibyendra!

Thank you Kiz very much for your comment. I'm glad to hear that you loved the way I described in the poem written for the Valentine day. And, I understand the difficulty while choosing good title Kiz. I also feel the same while thinking about title :blush:.

dibyendra
02-16-2008, 11:50 AM
Your Voices

Your voices, I can still recall;
still I hear them loud and clear.
When we met for the first time, I remember,
your voice, it was so innocent, soft, and gentle.

Your voices, after the time went by,
they were never the same again.
They still come crashing down on me;
voices, in which I can feel your pain.

Your voices, they were so innocent;
innocence showing your pitiful situation.
Sometimes, they used to burst in pain and anger;
they seem hunger for true love and affection.

Your voices, they changed with the time;
time that stole your innocence.
My voices, they had been a waste for you;
for you, they never made a good sense.

Your voices, they were sick and tired;
sick & tired of social norms, do's and don'ts.
And, you were always willing to escape from reality;
very impatient to run away from hypocrite society.

And our voices, they were all entangled;
and untangled unspoken.
Honey, but why did you fade away leaving such a painful void,
which can never be filled with tears?

- © Dibyendra Hyoju
June 27, 2007

dibyendra
02-16-2008, 11:59 AM
Remembrances recalled

Those remembrances recalled;
I embraced once again
to the glimpses of yours
with heart full of pain.
I got lost in the alleys of dream
where your hallucinatory reflections
startlingly opened my eyes with tears.

I remember every single moment my love...

Your crystalline eyes,
they were sparkling vibrantly,
drawn my eyes toward your appealing beauty.
Your Innocent smile
allured in front of you;
an undeniable fact.

Those frigid mornings - defrosted,
cold days without the sun - warmed,
and my lonesome nature - accompanied,
when figure of yours impressed into my heart.
Longing for conversation - fulfilled,
and my yearning for your love - amplified.

Our relation,
it flourished with the time,
with no stains it shined,
was clear as a blue sky.
Like free birds, we flew very high
and honestly sanguine that our love could never die.

Mysteriously,
dark clouds scattered around the clear blue sky
which rained with thunder and lightning.
Still, we patiently endeavoured to fly
but lost our directions and we fell apart.
But I couldn't stop you run away
although I cried "Stay".

Traces of your footsteps,
they were all washed away.
I couldn't follow my dear;
I've been a loser anyway.
Still, I searched you everywhere...
but you are nowhere to be found.
I screamed your name many times in agony,
wishing if you could hear my jading sound.

Later I came to know
that you were never mine...
You had already shined on someone else’s life.

- © Dibyendra Hyoju
Saturday, September 29, 2007

kiz_paws
02-18-2008, 12:00 AM
In Your Voices the words you speak are so true ... how in time, things change... I really enjoyed the final verse of that one, good stuff!

In Remembrances recalled I liked the way you painted the footsteps of a fickle lover ... here one moment in full bloom, then gone to dazzle another in the next moment. With no care to the heart that lays broken. You captured the emotion well, and that ending really tied the whole thing up nicely. I liked this poem a lot, dibyendra. :)

dibyendra
02-24-2008, 10:30 AM
In Your Voices the words you speak are so true ... how in time, things change... I really enjoyed the final verse of that one, good stuff!

In Remembrances recalled I liked the way you painted the footsteps of a fickle lover ... here one moment in full bloom, then gone to dazzle another in the next moment. With no care to the heart that lays broken. You captured the emotion well, and that ending really tied the whole thing up nicely. I liked this poem a lot, dibyendra. :)

Thanks a lot Kiz for your wonderful comments! :)

dibyendra
02-24-2008, 10:31 AM
In My Birthday

Before my birthday,
I would gaze my own reflection
to feel how much I have evolved
comparing with my old photographs.
And, I would turn off the light
to search myself
to sense if I could still
feel the way I used to feel.
And I would cry with tears of joy
knowing I'm still alive...

In my birthday,
I would whisper to my mother, "Your son turned 27".
And I would tell her,
"Ma, give me a tender kiss;
embrace me warmly
to feel your son with your finger tips."
And I would cry once again with tears of joy
knowing I'm still alive...
To hear lullaby
and the tender touch
of your loving hands on my face,
I desire to sleep in your lap ma
once again just like I used to do
when I was little boy.

Before that night,
I would request blanket of clouds to rain
to feel if I could still feel
the frigidness of November rain.
And I would cry once again with tears of joy
knowing I'm still alive...
I would invite the Stars, the planets, and the moon
into that endless open sky
and request them to appear
with gleaming dress
illuminating shimmering light for me that night.

Family and friends,
I won't expect anything else from you all...
Your presence is just all I need...
Just stay with me in that moment,
wish me to be alive,
and whisper, "Happy Birthday Dibyendra!"
We'll definitely dance that night
sharing the beauty of this Universe
with drinks in our hand.
And I would cry once again with tears of joy
knowing I'm still alive...

- © Dibyendra Hyoju
Friday, November 16, 2007

dibyendra
02-25-2008, 12:32 PM
Without you

I know your pain & sufferings
and I know how you've gone through.
Dreams I had for you have now only been dreams
and they will never come true.

Was our relationship that weak?
It has been blown away like it was written in the sand.
It has faded away with unknown reasons.
May be I'm the unfortunate one with the fake lines in my hand.

Nights without sleep when I'd suffered only with tears.
Only questions were running in my head.
I was wondering for what I had done wrong
and only remembering the things that she said.

I couldn't erase those memories & I tried a lot.
I even screamed, laughed, cried and tore all the pictures.
But, it isn’t easy to forget the time we spent together
and the talks over phone for hours and hours.

I tried to generate hate just to forget you
but it brought you even more near.
I tried being numb just to get you out of my mind
but the picture I had you in my mind got more clear.

So, now you've chosen the separate way
in which I can never walk upon.
I'm fallen back to the path where I was before
and I would never cross that path again.

I found the difference of not having you.
I was quite empty and got nothing to do.
The daily routine which I had has changed now
and I was quite lost on my own and got nowhere to go.

Now, I have to live in the present and I can't always live in the past.
Now, I have to change the broken track into something new
Even though I was not invited at the best moments of your life,
anyway I wish you a very best wishes for your new life and saying a goodbye.

-Dibyendra Hyoju
6/24/07