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Granny5
02-12-2008, 11:05 AM
Like every little girl that grew up during the time I grew up, I dreamed of being a cheerleader. At the school I attended, the only team sports for a girl were softball in the summer and cheerleading in the fall and winter. Cheerleaders were always so cute, popular, and, well, cheery. Plus they got to go to all the basketball games. All the young girls in my neighborhood practiced in the afternoon and all summer long and each of us hoped that we would be the lucky one to be chosen to do our perfect splits and Herky Jerks on the court with the whole school watching and all the younger girls wishing they could be just like us.

At my school cheerleaders started their career in the sixth grade. Cheerleaders were not selected because of their abilities but they were elected by their peers. If you were well liked but looked and moved like a water buffalo, you could be a cheerleader. If you were a snob and could do the perfect cheer, you might as well forget it. Anyway, I was elected on the first round of votes and I was thrilled. My Mother was thrilled too. I was excused from some chores so I could meet with the other five girls and practice. She made sure my green, pleated skirt was just the right length, my white camp shirt was starched and ironed perfectly, my black and white saddle oxfords were polished, and my curly hair was shiny, bouncy, and perfect. Then she sent me off to my first basketball game.

I did great! We all did. With our outstanding cheering and fabulous splits, we lead our team to victory. We all just knew our cheers were the reason for the victory. Without us, the team would have never been able to win. We were heroes. And we were popular and the center of attention for a while. It was pretty awesome.

Our next game was an away game; 15 miles East in the even smaller town of Leachville.
We practiced very hard because Leachville had a very good team and eight cheerleaders for their 6th grade squad. We would have to do our best if we were going to lead our team to victory again. We spent the week practicing our usual cheers and trying to come up with new ones. We worked very hard because we just knew we were the backbone of the team.

Each cheerleading squad took turns doing cheers at the quarter and at half time. Our first cheer was Hello. We’d dance our choreographed little dance and our jumps and spin around, each in turn, throw our arms out and wave and yell our name. It was a wonderful cheer for the time. We were all excited and a little nervous about our first away game.

I wasn’t allowed to ride the bus with the team so I rode to the game with my oldest brother and my third brother and his friend. His friend was the cutest boy in the seventh grade and the boy I just knew I was in love with. He had dark hair and the most beautiful eyes in the world. His name was Ronnie and in my dreams, he loved me too.

The cheerleading squad stood on the sidelines clapping and yelling for our boys, doing some Herky Jerks and occasionally a split or two to warm up for our Hello cheer at the quarter. I was the tallest on the squad so I always stood at the end of the lineup when we did Hello. Otherwise, I was in the middle and the shorter girls stood on either side of me in descending order. We all knew our cheers by heart so we watched the game and the crowd and waited. Up in the stands were my brothers and Ronnie waving and trying to give me the support they thought I needed to do well. What I saw was Ronnie flirting with me. I was so much in love.

At the quarter, we waited until the home squad had finished their two cheers and then we took the court. We did our little dance and, one by one, did a jerk, spun around so that our green bloomers showed, threw up our arms, waved, and yelled out our name. I waited for Debbie, who stood next to me in line, to yell “Debbie” then I did my jerk, spun, threw up my arm, and yelled “Debbie”…..
I didn’t even notice until Debbie sort of whispered, “You’re Sandy.” So I did another jerk, spun around, threw my arm out and yelled, “I mean Sandy!” and waved, just like nothing was wrong.

I finished the game without another incident, maintaining the attitude that nothing wrong had happened. I had the perfect splits and jumps throughout the rest of the game.
But Ronnie and my brothers were cracking up. Throughout the rest of the game, every time I’d look up in the stands at them, they were holding their sides and laughing. I don’t even remember who won the game. None of the other girls said a word about it. It could have easily have been one of them who messed up the cheer

Nothing was said in the car ride home, either. I think my oldest brother must have put his foot down about the other two being mean to me. But as soon as we got home they couldn’t wait to tell the rest of my family what had happened. My Mother was horrified! If I was so nervous that I’d forgotten my name, what would being a cheerleader do to my nerves if I was allowed to do it for the whole season? She just couldn’t put my psyche through such trauma. So the next day, after speaking to the cheerleading sponsor, she gathered my cheerleading pompoms, my cute, green, pleated skirt, and my starched, white camp shirt and took them to the girl who got the seventh number of votes.

School was never the same. I don’t remember attending another basketball game until I was in high school. When asked later in life if I was ever a cheerleader, I’d always say no. It was too hard to explain how I was for such a very short time.

I saw Debbie years later when she was in Memphis to attend the first Arkansas State/Memphis State football game. We ran into each other in a restaurant near Memphis State. She was with her boyfriend whom I’d never met. When she introduced us, she said,
“This is Sandy. I went to school with her. Remember the story I told you about the cheerleader who forgot her name?”

Virgil
02-12-2008, 11:31 AM
:lol: :lol: Granny I could listen to your stories all day long. But your mother was harsh. Completely over reacted. By the way, I like cheer leaders. They're so cute. ;)

DickZ
02-12-2008, 11:32 AM
Nice job, Granny, of describing one of those incredibly traumatic experiences that we all had when growing up. I'm not so sure you should have actually dropped out, because it wasn't really as bad as you thought. But then I wasn't there.

A story that everybody can relate to, in their own unique way from their own recollections, is always a big hit - especially when it's told so well.

I'm sure you reminded us all of things we'd just as soon forget about. But then, it's also fun to remember.

AuntShecky
02-12-2008, 01:06 PM
Very sweet reminiscence, rather than strictly speaking, a work of short fiction. I loved the breezy tone and the humor in this, Granny. The only change I'd make to the prose style is to combine your sentences, or try different types of sentences. Also, you could include some of the
little cheers or rhymes.

Thanks for the "fun read!"

Poppy
02-12-2008, 05:23 PM
I have heard this story probably 100 times, and I never tire of it.
great job wifey....
Poppy.

Granny5
02-12-2008, 09:08 PM
:lol: :lol: Granny I could listen to your stories all day long. But your mother was harsh. Completely over reacted. By the way, I like cheer leaders. They're so cute. ;)

Virgil, she wasn't harsh, she was just concerned for my mental health. :lol:
She didn't do it punish but to protect. My Mom wasn't big on punishment, but I think she was always concerned that we'd all go mad on her or something. With that many kids, I would think that she would be the one to go mad.

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 02:36 AM
Yes, thanks for the fun read, Granny! You are soooo cute! :)

DickZ
02-13-2008, 04:33 PM
I have heard this story probably 100 times, and I never tire of it.
great job wifey....
Poppy.
Wow, Poppy, that's great. Where did you hear the story? Do you know Granny personally? Is she really your wife? If so, why aren't you called Gramps instead of Poppy?

Granny5
02-13-2008, 05:09 PM
DickZ, Poppy is my husband, motherhubbard is our daughter, and browneyedbailey is our granddaugher. Poppy is called Poppy because
that's what browneyedbailey has always called him. I'm Granny because
that's what browneyedbailey has always called me. motherhubbard
introduced me to LitNet and I introduced Poppy. Poppy, motherhubbard, and browneyedbailey are poets. I just play with stories and what some
would call almost-poems. :lol:
He knows the story because everything my family gets together
someone has to bring it up!

Sweets America
02-13-2008, 06:56 PM
I loved it, Granny!:p You have nice tales. Thanks for sharing with us. :)

mercy_mankind
02-16-2008, 08:33 AM
DickZ, Poppy is my husband, motherhubbard is our daughter, and browneyedbailey is our granddaugher. Poppy is called Poppy because
that's what browneyedbailey has always called him. I'm Granny because
that's what browneyedbailey has always called me. motherhubbard
introduced me to LitNet and I introduced Poppy. Poppy, motherhubbard, and browneyedbailey are poets. I just play with stories and what some
would call almost-poems. :lol:
He knows the story because everything my family gets together
someone has to bring it up!

Is it true?
motherhubbard is your daughter?
It is very nice .
I'm leaving home to Net so as to discuss with another people except my parents and then I found them here :) . It is very very wonderful.
:) :) :) :)

APEist
02-18-2008, 12:53 PM
I love your stories Granny. Very satisfying ending to this one. The way you setup the situation where she forgot her name was done perfectly, imo. I cracked up, to tell you the truth.

There is just something really homey about your stories, something incredibly amiable. They are just so inviting for some reason. Anyways, it's a good quality to have.

Thanks for the read.

APEist
02-18-2008, 12:55 PM
Ps. Virgil is creepy

Nighteyes5678
02-21-2008, 08:39 PM
A very fun story that must have been very... traumatic, especially at 6th grade!

Stylistically, there are a few parts where the same word is repeated several times in the same sentance, as well as a few punctuation errors.

As far as plot/pacing goes, I would suggest trying to show your interest in Ronnie rather than telling it so bluntly. Or, if you want to tell it, then I suggest trying to do so earlier instead of right in the middle of the "action". Right now, it reads as an interrupter.

Still, I enjoyed reading it and really, isn't that the point?