love poem!!!!!!!

[mukta581]

In Love

The day you appeared I lost my heart
To you, to love.
And from that day I cannot part
From you, from love.

You hold me tight
To you, to love.
In my thoughts all day and night
Of you, of love.

I offer all that I have to give
To you, to love.
And all my days I want to live
With you, in love.

[PrinceMyshkin]

The seeming artlessness of this is what makes it work.

[mukta581]

Believe

What Is There,
To Believe In During Life,
Nothing Lasts,
Aside From Strife,
Life May Perish,
Life May End,
Our Soul We May Give,
Our Soul We May Spend,
But Our Love,
That Eternal Flame,
Will Never Dim,
Will Never Change,
It Will Forever Last,
When All Other Lights Leave,
For You Light My Life,
You Make Me Believe.

[kiz_paws]

You write beautifully, almost effortlessly, Mukta -- your poetry seems to come straight out of your heart and onto the screen. :nod:

Both poems were lovely, and I found the last line of Believe very very moving.. Wow.... :thumbs_up

[mukta581]

Thanks kiz!!!

[NikolaiI]

I am stuck on the words Eternal Flame.
It tears away everything else.
You are truly a poet, my love.
Your words tear away everything else.

"What Is There,
To Believe In During Life,
Nothing Lasts,
Aside From Strife,
Life May Perish,
Life May End,
Our Soul We May Give,
Our Soul We May Spend,
But Our Love,
That Eternal Flame,
Will Never Dim,
Will Never Change,
It Will Forever Last,
When All Other Lights Leave,
For You Light My Life,
You Make Me Believe."

[mukta581]

It Reminds Me of You!!!
The faint resonance of a familiar love song
Lingers in the seclusion of the young girls room
Dimming images planted solely on the walls
Torn love letters scattered and crowd the floor
Melancholy remnants of a lost broken love
Urgently trying to lastly break free and forget
Of all that hastily reminds me of your presence

When we first locked love struck eyes
I was compelled to be in your company
That sweet smile naturally filled with desire
Your charming scent left me utterly mystified
Soon my body pleasantly ached for your touch
My quivering lips yearned for your syrupy taste
I hopelessly longed to enter your pleasant world

Now left with the pieces of my abandoned heart
My soul left scarred; no longer radiating with love
Your broken promises forever haunting my dreams
Once endless smiles now a sinister stranger to my lips
Overwhelming hope in love now lost in the shadows
My lifeless eyes searching for happiness beyond reach
Hoping for a familiar voice to slowly reel me in

Your lasting memory now evident in all I see
Still reluctantly trying to hopelessly break free
Of all that holds reminiscences of you and me.

[mukta581]

Can't Keep My Promise!!!!
Always getting pulled away
Always getting swayed
Into doing things
That is against everything you prayed...

Made a promise to you
That I can't even keep
Promised you that
I'd always be there for you
To hold your hand
To protect you...
I can't do that
When your life
Is in the hands of others...

My heart is being pulled
Stretched and stretched
In so many directions
I want to take the three of you
My three muskateers...
My three warriors...
My three monkeys
I want to take you all under my wing.

That is truly the only way
To guarantee
That you will be safe...
That you will be loved
And that you will be happy...

Problem is -
Is it truly the right thing to do?
How am I going to do that
All by myself?
Conflicting opinions
Conflicting points-of-view
Nobody is listening
They are all just telling me what to do.
Stop telling me how I should feel
Stop explaining all the scenarios to me
I'm already endlessly pondering them...
Stop telling me that I shouldn't cry
My heart isn't always made of stone.
If anything
It is made of brittle glass
That shatters ever so easily...
When big, bright blue eyes
Look deep into yours...
When a little hand
Is desperately grasping yours
And you have to try
Try to explain
Why three precious boys
Can't live with those that love them
Why they can't stay.

Heart breaks more
When tears come
And all the reasons you have
Are selfish reasons
For not letting them stay.
Why does it have to be this way?
Why doesn't anyone seem to understand?
Why isn't anything simply in black and white?
Why are all the boundaries blurred?
Why do we all have to hurt?

[kiz_paws]

Oh mukta, such a wonderful poem is this ... you have poetically said the lament of all who have loved, lost, and who are trying to find their way back ...


Now left with the pieces of my abandoned heart
My soul left scarred; no longer radiating with love
Your broken promises forever haunting my dreams
Once endless smiles now a sinister stranger to my lips
Overwhelming hope in love now lost in the shadows
My lifeless eyes searching for happiness beyond reach
Hoping for a familiar voice to slowly reel me inthis particular stanza I found very moving indeed.

Great work, I look forward to more of your beautiful poetry!
K♥z

[mukta581]

Thank you kiz for your kind view about my poetry!!!

[mukta581]

I Stand alone!!!
I stand alone
No one is with me
I m solitude
I m weird myself
Why I stand alone
But I wonder
I can feel you
My eyes is close
But can feel you
No one is here
I stand alone
But I can hear u
My eyes is still close
I m dreaming about you
You are going far away from me
But tightly I m holding your hand
I could never let you go
But you are going far away
I am screaming
My tears come out
I want you
I want your love
I want to hold you till rest of my life
You are my soul
I could never let you go
I will wait for you
Will you come ?
Again I am eager to see u
I m waiting for you forever
I stand alone.

[farnoosh]

you write beautiful Mukta!

[mukta581]

Thank You farnoosh.

[pussnboots]

In Love

The day you appeared I lost my heart
To you, to love.
And from that day I cannot part
From you, from love.

You hold me tight
To you, to love.
In my thoughts all day and night
Of you, of love.

I offer all that I have to give
To you, to love.
And all my days I want to live
With you, in love.

Very heartfelt. One can use this a their wedding vows.

[mukta581]

Would You Be the One


Would you be the one
To walk my life with me
Take my soul into your dreams
Hold my hand and we shall see

Could you be the one
Fate has destined for me
When smiles have become a l'il shy
Is it time for a new journey

So I wonder as we walk
Perhaps closer than before
Feeling your heart beat by my side
Blushing just a l'il more

Could I hear what your heart
Is saying at this moment
Are you thinking about me
And watching my every movement

So I wonder as we talk
Perhaps faster than before
Why am I feeling so anxious
Is it you I'm longing for

Am I really flying
Or was that just my feet
Why am I staring as you leave
Feeling my life's incomplete

[blazeofglory]

In Love

The day you appeared I lost my heart
To you, to love.
And from that day I cannot part
From you, from love.

You hold me tight
To you, to love.
In my thoughts all day and night
Of you, of love.

I offer all that I have to give
To you, to love.
And all my days I want to live
With you, in love.

This love is only possible in a poem like this. In real life? I doubt.

[muchado22]

beautiful. completely describes a stage in my life right now. thank you for stating it so eloquently.

Would You Be the One

Could I hear what your heart
Is saying at this moment
Are you thinking about me
And watching my every movement

So I wonder as we talk
Perhaps faster than before
Why am I feeling so anxious
Is it you I'm longing for

[mukta581]

Let’s make precious love memory
Let’s make splendid love story
Time is running and making memory
My love is thriving day by day
Like a blossom tree
I am in deep fantasy with you
I am in love slumber and dreaming
Love is sparking like moonlight ray
Lets come true my dreams
Be my shelter
Let’s come with me in future
And leave love memory behind
Make your future with me
And good past memory too
Its mine love journey
Be my voyage partners

[The Walker]

In Love

The day you appeared I lost my heart
To you, to love.
And from that day I cannot part
From you, from love.

You hold me tight
To you, to love.
In my thoughts all day and night
Of you, of love.

I offer all that I have to give
To you, to love.
And all my days I want to live
With you, in love.

I liked this one! The repetition of the second verse in the second stanza lost it's meaning when I first read it but at the second time I read it it made perfect sense. Good Writing :thumbs_up

[The Walker]

This love is only possible in a poem like this. In real life? I doubt.

i disagree with you blazeofglory. I think it can be possible

[mukta581]

O mind pay in attention

My love has come to me

Worries go away

My love takes away my tears

And bring back my joy and smile

My love has come to me

To ease my pain

My love knows how love can grow

How tears can away

O heartbeats be faster more then veins

My sweetheart has arrived in my dreams

O Mind, just worship to lord

This dream will never break…

O mind find your resting place

My love has come………………

[BuckyKev]

In Love::::

I really like that poem. The first comment afterwards said the seemingly artlessness of the poem is what makes it work. I can't totally disagree but I did really enjoy reading it. I always read poems I like more than once; to see if they offer more than one thought or perspective. For me this poem did. I thought of each person I believed I loved and how much meaning the word "love" held for me when I used it.

[mukta581]

In Love::::

I really like that poem. The first comment afterwards said the seemingly artlessness of the poem is what makes it work. I can't totally disagree but I did really enjoy reading it. I always read poems I like more than once; to see if they offer more than one thought or perspective. For me this poem did. I thought of each person I believed I loved and how much meaning the word "love" held for me when I used it.

Thank you!!!!

[paperleaves]

The poem "Believe" is beautiful on so many levels-- your effortlessness creates an almost breathless whisper when listening to these poems. Thank you :)

[mukta581]

Moon of Love

I want to tell you one truth.
You know how much you mean to me,
If I touch you in my dreams
love passes through my heart.

Let me dissolve in your tears,
So I can touch your pain.
Let me dissolve in your love,
So I can reach your soul.
Your love is the deepest secret in my heart.
You are my dearest, you are always high like a crystal moon

[jajdude]

Though there seem to be a lot of cliches in these poems, most of them are really nice and genuine.

[mounamrit]

Moon of Love

I want to tell you one truth.
You know how much you mean to me,
If I touch you in my dreams
love passes through my heart.

Let me dissolve in your tears,
So I can touch your pain.
Let me dissolve in your love,
So I can reach your soul.
Your love is the deepest secret in my heart.
You are my dearest, you are always high like a crystal moon

Love is multidimensional, just like your poem.