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ntropyincarnate
02-09-2008, 10:16 PM
Just keep talking,
then you won't have to hear
what I say,
so trivial.

Just talk louder,
then you won't have to hear
my voice,
so distasteful.

Just keep making
white noise that blurs together
so I can't think,
and make me weak.

Just ignore me,
and soon I will become
invisible-
the ghost you made me.

kiz_paws
02-10-2008, 01:19 AM
Just keep making
white noise that blurs together
so I can't think, I really liked that phrase, ntropy!
As well, I loved your ending. I think that we have all felt like this at one time or another, and you have captured the spirit of it quite nicely. :thumbs_up