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Chava
02-06-2008, 04:25 PM
Ridiculous!
It tickles, more than my independant-self understands.
The disguise, my thoughts abuse my confidence,
my lacking self assurance.
How! How do you rattle my knees so?
Disturb my foundations, and leave me tilting,
dependant on your confirmations,
your itterations,
your giggles even.

Every time!
My considerations canter across my mental carpet.
All the passing whims confirm my suspiscion,
edges me into this doubt!
Argh! Do you sense your effect?
Approaching you, my gait strengthens,
A warm rush of assurance,
we laugh together,
we have internal jokes.

Oh...
How this insecurity tickles me.
Drags me along by my stolid feet,
Places my paw in yours.
Soft? In my pretentious red glove.
I imagine you are clutching it,
Assuring yourself of it's presence,
falling, the accumulation of frailty,
we see it simultaneusly. And we substantiate each other.

PrinceMyshkin
02-06-2008, 08:18 PM
I especially liked these lines:



Soft? In my pretentious red glove.
I imagine you are clutching it,
Assuring yourself of it's presence,
falling, the accumulation of frailty

Chava
02-07-2008, 02:44 AM
Thanks, sorry about this poem actually, it wasn't really meant as anything. I just had a brief panic, and needed to let it out. Shortly after all was well, haha, but thanks anyway, it's sweet of you to notice.

blazeofglory
02-07-2008, 12:23 PM
Indeed a poem of this majesty cascades when one undergoes a particular feeling
in life.