Sad Little L

[kiz_paws]

These words are dedicated to "L"

Dear little girl
with your beautiful brown eyes
wide with wonder
at a world much too big for you

Dear little flower
you try to brave these stormy times
but your stem is so frail, so fragile .... please ...
use me to lean on

Dear little raindrop
that tries to splash with the others;
you don't have to blend in
if you don't want to

Dear little sunbeam
you shine a different light
onto all you dance for
brilliant and dazzling
yet too blinding for most

Dear little icicle
dripping, dripping, yet I can't catch you
please stay awhile
we haven't had you long enough

Dear little heart
we love you


K♥z
02-06-08

[dramasnot6]

How sadly beautiful kiz...
I am touched by it all.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Oh my, whoever this was written for, I hope she saw it - and if she did, how moved she must have been.

[kiz_paws]

Thanks you two.

Prince, no, she did not see it. I am glad you liked it. :)

[Granny5]

Kiz, this is so beautiful and moving.

[Pensive]

Very touching and beautiful, kiz!

[pussnboots]

very heartwarming

[blazeofglory]

This poem is subtle and it penetrates deeper and deeper. It proves how fragile or weak a thing of beauty, the way a dew drop is. It sparkles in the sunshine but melts away immediately.

[kiz_paws]

Thanks everyone. And blaze, I loved your words, they moved me. :)

[Auriga]

Very moving poem. You can clearly see the emotions seeping through each and every word.

[dibyendra]

These words are dedicated to "L"

Dear little girl
with your beautiful brown eyes
wide with wonder
at a world much too big for you

Dear little flower
you try to brave these stormy times
but your stem is so frail, so fragile .... please ...
use me to lean on

Dear little raindrop
that tries to splash with the others;
you don't have to blend in
if you don't want to

Dear little sunbeam
you shine a different light
onto all you dance for
brilliant and dazzling
yet too blinding for most

Dear little icicle
dripping, dripping, yet I can't catch you
please stay awhile
we haven't had you long enough

Dear little heart
we love you


K♥z
02-06-08

Ah Kiz, such a beautiful poem! I'm inspired to write love poem for the upcoming valentine day ;). Really :) Your valentine would surely love this poem if you haven't shown him/her this poem yet. And yes, this is really a moving poem.

I agree with Blaze completely regarding his thought .


This poem is subtle and it penetrates deeper and deeper. It proves how fragile or weak a thing of beauty, the way a dew drop is. It sparkles in the sunshine but melts away immediately.


:thumbs_up

Keep up your good work Kiz. :thumbs_up

[kiz_paws]

Auriga and dibyendra, that was very very kind of you, thank you so much. :)

And I hope that you would share your valentine prose with us, dibyendra, as your poetry is very beautiful and tenderly written. Cheers, Kizzo

[NikolaiI]

Very beautiful - reminds me of refuge, like, going to true refuge, etc.

Hope to see you around again some day, Kiz, if you ever see this.