Seagulls

[Grace&Chemicals]

Seagulls

They Float In Air

Moving

Between Particles That Have Been

Around

In And Out Of Lungs

Forever

[symphony]

Its a great li'l one without the "forever" in the last line.

[PrinceMyshkin]

With all due respect to Symphony, keep "forever" as it adds to the enigmatic quality of this strange - and therefore intriguing & provocative - poem.

[DickZ]

I agree wholeheartedly with Prince - keep forever.

I don't know about the enigmatic quality, or the intriguing or the provacative stuff. For me, it just makes for a smoother ending - it would be a rough and abrupt landing without it.