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ntropyincarnate
02-04-2008, 03:38 PM
Lie awake,
Screaming headache,
White-hot tears
Follow fears.
I want a sleep
For dreams too deep.
But too many thoughts,
Too many knots,
To be able to steer
Away from my fear
For all the feelings
That I can't feel.

birgitta_nell@y
02-06-2008, 03:49 PM
Wow, I like it! Know that feeling too, so it's very well written. It describes the situation perfectly.

blazeofglory
02-09-2008, 08:56 AM
Yes this is beautifully presneted and of course this is the predicament we all live in, in this technology driven world, a very inescapable situation indeed.