I feel...

[Tuninks]

I feel empty,
Void is beyond comparison,
Where is the love I felt?
Did it die with you?

I feel despair,
dismal cannot define.
Where is the happiness I felt?
Did it flow away with these tears?

I feel alone,
The cold pressing in,
Where is the warmth I felt?
Did you steal it away when you left?

I feel... Dead.

[kiz_paws]

Tuninks, there are a few things I liked about this poem. You followed a pattern nicely in each of the three stanza. That is difficult to do and yet be creative (I find, anyhow). You did it quite well. I also liked the one line summing up at the end. Very powerful, I love touches like that. Good job.

[white camellia]

True voice from inside. Many could be familiar with these sentiments. Overall the form works. Just a little change, it could become another maybe:

Void
is beyond comparison,
Where is the love I felt?
Did it die with you?

Dismal
cannot define.
Where is the happiness I felt?
Did it flow away with these tears?

Cold
pressing in,
Where is the warmth I felt?
Did you steal it away when you left?

Dead.

[Tuninks]

Wow, good job white, I like the new change :) Thanks guys!