With These Tears

[Tuninks]

I held you in my arms,
This passion still burning,
I pressed my lips to yours,
With these tears in my eyes.

I told you I loved you,
My heart racing with this drive,
I just couldn't let go,
With these tears in my eyes.

I stand above you,
My thoughts driving me insane!
I touched the stone with pain,
With these tears in my eyes.

The passion now dead,
My heart skips a beat,
My mind finally lost,

Leaving me with nothing but these tears...

[Tuninks]

I can see you breathing,
with my own two eyes.
They tell me you're gone,
but they are all wrong!

I can see you breathing!
I know you're alive!
I can still see you,
with my own two eyes!

They're lying,
they're wrong,
they're in denial,
by saying you're gone.

But I can still see you,
With my own two eyes,
You're still breathing,
you're still alive!

Can they not see?
Are they so blind?
Are they so wrong?
To not use their eyes?

I can still save you...
Don't tell me these lies...
She is still breathing...
I can see it with my own two eyes...

[Tuninks]

With her hand growing cold,
He begged for a promise.
With her eyes growing pale,
He begged for her word.

"Don't die, please, don't die,"
He would plead.
"I want you to live!"
He cried as he struggled to warm her hands.

"To live,"
she began to speak.
"To live like this is to die..."
She replied.

He shook his head,
tears filling his eyes,
her hands growing colder,
her eyes growing paler.

"Without you I am dead,"
He countered.
"Life without you is a life not worth having."
He whispered, tears touching his cheeks.

"Then together, we shall live forever..." Was her last reply...

[blazeofglory]

I held you in my arms,
This passion still burning,
I pressed my lips to yours,
With these tears in my eyes.

I told you I loved you,
My heart racing with this drive,
I just couldn't let go,
With these tears in my eyes.

I stand above you,
My thoughts driving me insane!
I touched the stone with pain,
With these tears in my eyes.

The passion now dead,
My heart skips a beat,
My mind finally lost,

Leaving me with nothing but these tears...

I have read many of your poems. It seems you are born for it.

[blazeofglory]

With her hand growing cold,
He begged for a promise.
With her eyes growing pale,
He begged for her word.

"Don't die, please, don't die,"
He would plead.
"I want you to live!"
He cried as he struggled to warm her hands.

"To live,"
she began to speak.
"To live like this is to die..."
She replied.

He shook his head,
tears filling his eyes,
her hands growing colder,
her eyes growing paler.

"Without you I am dead,"
He countered.
"Life without you is a life not worth having."
He whispered, tears touching his cheeks.

"Then together, we shall live forever..." Was her last reply...

How beautiful the world would have been with these feelings.

[blazeofglory]

[QUOTE=Tuninks;521365]I can see you breathing,
with my own two eyes.
They tell me you're gone,
but they are all wrong!

I can see you breathing!
I know you're alive!
I can still see you,
with my own two eyes!

They're lying,
they're wrong,
they're in denial,
by saying you're gone.

But I can still see you,
With my own two eyes,
You're still breathing,
you're still alive!

Can they not see?
Are they so blind?
Are they so wrong?
To not use their eyes?

I can still save you...
Don't tell me these lies...
She is still breathing...
I can see it with my own two eyes...[/QUOT

Of course parting can not be easily accepted the way you wrote.

[kiz_paws]

Tuninks -- all three poems were very moving, but the one that I found most outstanding in its quality and effect on me would have to be:


With her hand growing cold,
He begged for a promise.
With her eyes growing pale,
He begged for her word.

"Don't die, please, don't die,"
He would plead.
"I want you to live!"
He cried as he struggled to warm her hands.

"To live,"
she began to speak.
"To live like this is to die..."
She replied.

He shook his head,
tears filling his eyes,
her hands growing colder,
her eyes growing paler.

"Without you I am dead,"
He countered.
"Life without you is a life not worth having."
He whispered, tears touching his cheeks.

"Then together, we shall live forever..." Was her last reply... You sound like you have been through a lot. Peace to you, friend. Kizzo :)