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rocksea
10-06-2004, 08:53 AM
a poem [from my friend] and reply [from me]

On Tue, 2004-07-20 at 00:18, anna the anonymous wrote:
................
The not-so-gentle tug inside my insides,
The time has come to give up some blood,
To feel all woman,all mother-someday-to-be,
God punished,cursed,Eve accepted,shamed.
O but the sheer joy of being a woman,
The laughter of a girl-woman menstruating,
The quiet cry of a girl in monthly pain-
Would I give all this up to be a man?
Never!not as long as the world will be,
For there's power and beauty in womanhood
THere's strength and romance,love and zeal.
Tiny goblets,huge clots,all mine,all Earth's.
................

On Tue, 2004-07-20 at 20:07, rock the sea wrote:

wowww how I respect the way you bring out yourself anna!!
I am so happy that you talked about a topic
which is so cute as it is but seldom does anyone take as such.
Now, see how a one sided affair can be deepened into
................
tiny goblets,huge clots,all yours huh?
shall i with my gallant manhood
have a not-so-gentle tug inside ur insides
the time has come to give up some life
to feel all woman and man together as one
god punished,cursed,adam n eve accepted,shamed
o but the sheer joy of being together
the laughter of a woman in my arms
the satisfaction in being inside you as u cry
would we give all this up to be alone?
never!not as long as the world is ours
for there's power and beauty in togetherness
there's strength and romance, love and zeal
tiny goblet,huge clots,let retreat for a while
let life a new begin, between us, inside us
................


yes yes you have been menstruating for a long time
you have been keeping you inside you anna
time to spread your fragrance
time to fulfill your menstruating self, the aching heart
time to mirror yourself in my heart
come, spread over me anna, forever let us be

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Miranda
10-06-2004, 07:23 PM
Well I was gonna have my supper..but I don't think I'll bother now!

Miranda

Jester
10-10-2004, 09:56 PM
Thanks Miranda, made me laugh real hard....

I like the poems though, never seen anyone take that approach to menstraution in poetry before (it could be that I'm simply not well read)...

seeker
10-11-2004, 06:13 PM
Well I was gonna have my supper..but I don't think I'll bother now!

Miranda

:sick:

ditto here...

kushi
10-12-2004, 01:45 AM
Love your poem! hehe

rocksea
10-15-2004, 11:26 PM
hehe,, :D makes me laugh too.. but don't u think some perspectives ought to be changed??
how a woman conceives it, how a man conceives it,,