I can rhyme?!

[andave_ya]

:D I had to write a poem in the same vein as Robert Frost's poem "I shot an arrow into the air/It fell to earth, I knew not where."

Distant Memory

I heard a melody, note by note,
A tune on which I now will dote.
It swelled before it dipped down low,
And following, I heard it go.

To plumb the leagues of an ocean deep,
Seeing visions that make me weep.
For were it not for that lightsome sound,
To earth and things known I would yet be bound.

So to you, to this music sublime,
Bowing I offer my humble rhyme.
In the distant memory of things not yet seen,
I found the girl I might have been.

[blazeofglory]

:D I had to write a poem in the same vein as Robert Frost's poem "I shot an arrow into the air/It fell to earth, I knew not where."

Distant Memory

I heard a melody, note by note,
A tune on which I now will dote.
It swelled before it dipped down low,
And following, I heard it go.

To plumb the leagues of an ocean deep,
Seeing visions that make me weep.
For were it not for that lightsome sound,
To earth and things known I would yet be bound.

So to you, to this music sublime,
Bowing I offer my humble rhyme.
In the distant memory of things not yet seen,
I found the girl I might have been.

Even with rhymes you have no t compromised with facts.

[andave_ya]

Thank you very much! I appreciate all your comments.

[Shurtugal]

i like it!

p.s. tell BP that i got a song that she'll love!