mirrored wrong

[rocksea]

take me as your home
i would love to be your first resort
but if you dont
i would be your last resort as well
fall and fall as you may
but i will stand to be your home
and oh dear you are just like that ugly duckling
you had always mirrored urself in wrong places
just sit in front of me
and mirror urself in my heart
and you'll see you have the beautiful of the minds


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[malikm24]

"just sit in front of me
and mirror urself in my heart
and you'll see you have the beautiful of the minds"

I really liked these lines.
Nice poem:)

[Jay]

i would love to be your first resort
but if you dont
i would be your last resort as well

I think I'd like to be the last resort, but then it's probably not the point of the poem :)
I definitely agree with malikm, the lines s/he quoted are very nice :)

[rocksea]

thanx madhur (malikm) and jay.


I think I'd like to be the last resort, but then it's probably not the point of the poem :)

why cant there be two or more 'points of the poem' :angel:
well there is a long story behind this where i had tried
to bring back a friend to my life. she never looked at me
as her daily resort or even a holiday resort :( so i thot
i wud offer myself as a last resort
then the mirroring part is when she thot herself
unworthy. thought of mirroring the best of her back
and show her how worthy she is! :D

[subterranean]

well maybe you're friend thought that she wasnt worth it? coz she considered herself unworthy..

[Jay]

Well, there definitelly could be more than one point in a poem ;), lol
After your explanation I realized we were talking about two different kinds of 'last resorts' then :)

[subterranean]

which are...?

[Jay]

You just had to ask, arrr? lol
last resort - last choice, no one else left
last resort - the last one to go to without the need to go looking further

[subterranean]

i was just teasing you ;)

[Jay]

Got that, just thought more people could ask the same, lol
Speaking of which, can you see the difference in that? ^

[subterranean]

yes,,the first one is cruel to be done..a pragmatic action..
the second is sweet..and that's really a true friendship

[amuse]

take me as your home
what a wonderful beginning...

[Avalive]

Simple and short, yet so powerful,really nice