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aashishameya
01-25-2008, 02:16 AM
Life, life, flow, flow
Shine, shine, glow, glow
Wild spirit plant roses
Nourishes soil, spread kisses
Divine wind blow, blow

Wind picks up the seed;
Bagger souls are waiting to feed
Throws them into hungry earth;
And pour rain for there birth
Love trees grow, grow

PrinceMyshkin
01-25-2008, 08:11 AM
I've editted a couple of things that are either typos or grammatical errors:


Life, life, flow, flow
Shine, shine, glow, glow
Wild spirit plant roses
Nourishes soil, spread kisses
Divine wind blow, blow

Wind picks up the seed;
Bigger souls are waiting to feed
Throws them into hungry earth;
And pour rain for their birth
Love trees grow, grow

Apart from that it's a happy little song, reminiscent of Blake's "Songs of Innocence."

blazeofglory
01-25-2008, 11:14 PM
Life, life, flow, flow
Shine, shine, glow, glow
Wild spirit plant roses
Nourishes soil, spread kisses
Divine wind blow, blow

Wind picks up the seed;
Bagger souls are waiting to feed
Throws them into hungry earth;
And pour rain for there birth
Love trees grow, grow

What a beautiful poem in perfect rhymes!!

aashishameya
01-29-2008, 09:07 AM
thank u poets for comments

white camellia
01-29-2008, 10:07 AM
I also enjoyed this 'happy little song', asshishameya. Thank you.

aashishameya
01-30-2008, 01:23 AM
thank u too Camellia..to be part of this happiness

jon1jt
01-30-2008, 01:26 AM
I'd skip down the street with you singing this out loud, very catchy, me likes!