Raven

[alakungfu]

Rapt in her approach,

Atenuated mien

Calculated, she'll broach

Her quarry and careen



Dizzy into his chest

Then animated again

Introduce her best

Charms to her new best friend.



"I'm sorry, honey...

I just missed the curb.

Angel thinks its funny

And she'll get what she deserves



Sooner or later."

[PrinceMyshkin]

I enjoyed your flexibility with the rhymes which kept this from being doggerel.

[alakungfu]

I agree Prince Myshkin. That's why I kept it short.

[Anza]

Cool! The very last line was a nice touch.

[Pendragon]

Beautiful! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/BlackCrow.gif

[blazeofglory]

Really interesting to read.