Forever, to Surrender

[Tuninks]

To give up, to surrender,
They asked me to,
They asked me to stop,
Yet I won't.

When you started crying...

To stop, to discontinue,
They told me you were gone,
They told me you left,
Yet you are lying right in front of me.

When your heart stopped...

To will no more, to not strive,
They dropped their hands,
They let go of faith,
Yet I didn't.

When you held no life...

I could not define this,
I kept pressing,
I willed you to live,
Yet you didn't.

Forever, to surrender to death...

[blazeofglory]

To give up, to surrender,
They asked me to,
They asked me to stop,
Yet I won't.

When you started crying...

To stop, to discontinue,
They told me you were gone,
They told me you left,
Yet you are lying right in front of me.

When your heart stopped...

To will no more, to not strive,
They dropped their hands,
They let go of faith,
Yet I didn't.

When you held no life...

I could not define this,
I kept pressing,
I willed you to live,
Yet you didn't.

Forever, to surrender to death...

You seem to have a passion for composing poems. I read many of yours and find them appealing to my test.