Thank you god

[aashishameya]

A child on the way
A smiling flower gay
Eternal dewdrops’ touch
Glimpse of my first crush
I asked for little
You bestowed everything

[kiz_paws]

What a sweet and humble poem. I loved it! :thumbs_up

[Sweets America]

Nice little poem. I like the last two lines.:)

[Pendragon]

Oh, yeah, Ashy, Those last two lines: beautiful. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Angel.gif

[blazeofglory]

A child on the way
I asked for little
You bestowed everything

This is really beautiful, and of course in a few words you said lots of things. The beauty of it is that it condenses lots of ideas, ranges of meanings. I do not know what I got in this piece I really got immersed.

Notwithstanding whatever the poet has to say, something spiritual or others, the profundity of the poem moved me beyond imagination.

[B-Mental]

and said with so few words, love it. I hear cowbells on this one. B

[aashishameya]

and thank you poets