Trinny

[Aston]

Your self imposed decision
Left you on your own
You planned it all with precision
Now no one listens to you moan
It's time you grew up
You're tormenting your own self
You're all out of luck
Placed upon the high shelf
We can wait no longer
It's not down to you anymore
Plans you cannot Conjure
Too many hearts you have tore
Treated like sh*t
We thought you were happy
Thought you were fit
But your locked in your nappy
Stuck immature
You've had everyone now
No longer can you lure

[Anza]

Replace "Your" with "You're" in lines 6 and 7. Otherwise, I think its great!

[Aston]

Lol thanks ^^

[Bakiryu]

replace "desicsion" with decision
"presicsion" with precision
and all the "Its" with It's

otherwise is pretty good, for a first poem ♥

[Aston]

Lol I used to use "chatspeak" So apostrophies are new to me ^^