two poems

[poddarku]

A right moment

The tram, lighted, tickled away into night
Trees had a talk and now they bound in a bow.
A few merry wines fell on the grass.
One’ll stoop to amass those purple flowers.
A boy of 15 and you told them 18.
Loved to watch the wild evening
Passed under the trees of the park.

You always, were right about the climax
When you would come and asked
“Sir, madam-want some peanuts?”


Boy with a special pair of eyes

By the time you sixteen
You know there is
Something seriously
Gone wrong with me.

Throw me out?
No you cannot.
Motherhood is not what they say
Still, it is all you possess.

So you pray and pray.
A prayer for me:
So that I don’t often see
Floats of blue bubbles on the sky.
Or, the dragonfly,
Only friend of mine,
Do not disturb me at night
And entice me to fly.

Night is a time
I could fly:
Soft flakes of dark white
Around my eyes.
Your warm hands of morning
Always bring me down
Only to find, I have become a boy
Whom others call a blind.

[mukta581]

I just know I love you

I've found an angel
And the angel was you
Don't know what to say
I just know I love you

Can't get you out of my head
Can't get you out of my mind
Don't know what to do
I just know I love you

I love you very much
But how will I tell you
Don't know what will you think
I just know I love you


Love, before first sight :D

For once I can't seem to write,
What I feel inside,
I can only concentrate on,
These three words in my mind.

Can't seem to express,
The way you make feel,
But I have to pinch myself,
Before I know it''s real.

Every word I start to read,
Scatters across the page,
These three words that I keep saying,
Have me in a daze.

Staring at your picture,
I'm not sure I'll ever see,
Why someone, as cute as you,
Would say these words to me.

But I know that I mean them,
Each and every time,
Somehow I know you mean them too,
So that suits me just fine.

All my life I was missing something,
To make my dreams come true,
These empty spaces were filled in,
When I fell in love with you.

It's the way you are so perfect,
How you're there when I am down,
The way that you made me fly,
When I was so deep underground.

It's every single little thing about
And not a bit more or less,
That is getting me to feel,
God has made me blessed.

I can't seem to paraphrase,
The many butterflies,
Skipping of my heart beat,
Or the light twinkling in my eyes.

You're not like anyone else,
You're as perfect as can be,
I love you, I really do,
I love you to infinity.

We're Mr. and Mrs. Adorabible,
We started of the best of friends,
But I will love you for longer than forever,
Longer than forever, I'll love you.

[PrinceMyshkin]

The first two poems show evidence of an interesting eccentric imagination, but the love poem is much too long, just a series of variations on the fact that you love him and he loves you... It's very hard to top that but the effort to try to do so just results in diluting the sentiment.

[Pendragon]

A right moment

The tram, lighted, tickled away into night
Trees had a talk and now they bound in a bow.
A few merry wines fell on the grass.
One’ll stoop to amass those purple flowers.
A boy of 15 and you told them 18.
Loved to watch the wild evening
Passed under the trees of the park.

You always, were right about the climax
When you would come and asked
“Sir, madam-want some peanuts?”


Boy with a special pair of eyes

By the time you sixteen
You know there is
Something seriously
Gone wrong with me.

Throw me out?
No you cannot.
Motherhood is not what they say
Still, it is all you possess.

So you pray and pray.
A prayer for me:
So that I don’t often see
Floats of blue bubbles on the sky.
Or, the dragonfly,
Only friend of mine,
Do not disturb me at night
And entice me to fly.

Night is a time
I could fly:
Soft flakes of dark white
Around my eyes.
Your warm hands of morning
Always bring me down
Only to find, I have become a boy
Whom others call a blind.It's hard to beat the dry humor of "Sir, Madame, want some peanuts?"...:) :D :lol:

[mukta581]

Love Is ...

Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a play,
Love is what I feel for you,
Each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is like a song,
Love is a great emotion,
That keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart,
My body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving,
Like a love I can't control,
So remember when your eyes meet mine,
I love you with all my heart,
And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start.

[mukta581]

I Will Love You Forever

I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile
And your kind, thoughtful way,
The joy that you bring
To my life every day.
I love you today
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever
With all of my heart.

[PrinceMyshkin]

You use simple, familiar rhymes, but you use them so open-heartedly and innocently - that they work!

[mukta581]

thanks prince!!!!