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ShadowID
01-17-2008, 01:48 PM
Replaceable Everything

An irreplaceable facet
of daily of life
seems to be nonexistent.
Everything is an allusion
and nothing truly matters.

I am not irreplaceable.
Nor am I unique.
The world would still turn;
breath or no breath from me.
I am sad that my end has come
so close, so near, so quickly.

My replaceable self
will arrive when I die.
To be missed by 3 or 4 or 5
is insignificantly beautiful.
To be missed by none
is a truth of life.

As replaceable as I may be,
my power lies
in the undeniable truth
that I love you.
That is all that truly exists
for me.

But undeniably, indisputably,
my love for you is not
irreplaceable.


Something I wrote. Tell me what you think :)

blazeofglory
01-26-2008, 12:15 AM
No, love is not replaceable.

ShadowID
01-27-2008, 08:22 PM
No, love is not replaceable.

I don't believe the poem says that love is replaceable.

Adesaria
02-06-2008, 09:41 PM
I like it. Alot.

Lots and lots. It has this truth that seems to say we're one in millions...