Celeste

[Avalive]

Celeste

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The sky’s falling into the sea
Making the latter celeste, fading away itself
The color that nothing can penetrate or invade
The density of holy liquid from celestial world
You won’t see it through, you can sense it
It frozen in your eyes, changes your view
Makes the sea a sapphire like real
Puzzles you, misleads you by its beauty
The perfection never found
It makes you fall in the illusion of satisfaction
In a peaceful way by the tranquility of its tides
Pushing you, granting you physical pleasure
The coldness touches your bone
Wakes your dozy soul by hurting your nerves
The deep blue makes your blood hidden
Then your pain be hidden
The perfection never be found
If I can opt the paths in the worldly life
Can I be reborn rather than to be redeemed
On my cheek, would I see a fresh color, which is unnamed

The power of supernatural wind
Sets me on a piece of olive leaf
I swing like a drunken feather
Falling in the depth of mysterious puddle
Endless confusion and delusion
Failures of me is taking away my liberty of cremation
Right after my death my eyes won’t close, my name still stinks
They left it deserted and corrupted
The punishment in God’s name they grant

I’m centered by the ripple of right and wrong
Black and white switches their faces
Tides change their beats
Never caught by my hands
Things do not stay real while once they were
The cost of being a human costs being one
The perfection of exhausting your treasures
Being more what you want to be
Less of what you can be

The sky keeps falling without any ends
Being separated from the sea
But they resonate in the same spirit of blue
Were they once twins in God’s hand
Will one of them revisit the other?
To be together again in the celeste

[amuse]

o my goodness! i was wondering yesterday where have you been. what a lovely surprise.

this started out for me as...a really nice melding of the sun and sea. i like
"The sky’s falling into the sea
Making the latter celeste, fading away itself
The color that nothing can penetrate or invade"
how it ends on the same note is great too, i like when i'm either left hanging or brought full circle.

i was really surprised when all of a sudden, i felt the rhythm, Very strong, almost punchy when i was halfway through. like this total intense something or other, almost like i could hear what you heard when you wrote this. that's the first time that's happened to me. really glad to see you back.

[Avalive]

Happy to see you too Amuse

Let's keep dwelling in a poetic manner