A Poem

[gideon]

Dear members,
I wrote a poem titled The Voice of my Heart. I wrote it in an Haiku form. This is the poem:

Do it, don't do it
I will not, I will do it
Regret, I realize.

Members do comment.

Thanks.
from Gideon.

[Pendragon]

It's good haiku in that it has the required 17 syllables. One point. Haiku is not usually titled, and is usually more about nature and man's harmony with it. Be not discouraged. Some of mine on the haiku thread are horrible! :p

[Nasser]

Nice start Gideon, I guess your next Haiku will surely click!
Cheers

[aashishameya]

good one dear....