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sycho_warrior
09-18-2004, 06:05 AM
Hiding in the shadows where you cannot see me
This love I have for you is what keeps me alive
I cannot intrude in what you have
But I can admire from a distance.
Looking at the light of my life

I realise that my search for perfection has ended
I always wanted to reach the stars
Now I see them close up each time I stare into your eyes

I know I can say that you are the core of my world
While I cannot tell you how much I love you
I’ll carry it in my heart
Nurturing it
Till the day it’s possible for you and I
Or till the day I die

the mooring
09-20-2004, 04:40 PM
i am very happy cause iam the first visitor to your poem..
i like it very much ....do you know?? somtimes i envy those people who express their real feeling toword thier lovers...AHHHHHHHHH
have a nice and useful time

Kahrey
09-20-2004, 09:51 PM
That is very good! I like it! It holds much deep emotion. It's very good!

sycho_warrior
09-23-2004, 04:14 PM
lol it's not written to someone I love, it was written for someone to give to someone, but thanks for the compliments :)