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nouf
12-29-2007, 05:42 AM
Hello everybody, I'm a fresh new member here. :blush:

I've found this forum and was so glad.

I need some help in editing my essay and giving me some advice on it to make it better.

The topic that I had to write about is "the effect of media on Muslims and Arabs". It was so difficult that I had to read alot about them!

I just need some extra pairs of eyes on it! I'll really appreciate your help :yawnb:

It's about 700-800 words.

Here it is:



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Thank you in advance.