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thechampion
12-26-2007, 02:03 AM
these are not unique
this is not special;
god comitted suicide
-to get away...

and the little continue
with insipid perseverence
against all confusion to create
-to distract

But all in all
plunked down in ****
given to evolution
-seems novel.

But it most definately is
not.

PrinceMyshkin
12-26-2007, 09:11 AM
Wonderful metaphysical rambling and as if every word cost you a pint of blood!

ampoule
12-26-2007, 09:32 AM
these are not unique
this is not special;
god comitted suicide
-to get away...

and the little continue
with insipid perseverence
against all confusion to create
-to distract

But all in all
plunked down in ****
given to evolution
-seems novel.

But it most definately is
not.

No, it is not.
How I like this, lean and spare, but very meaty. Just what I need for the new year.

thechampion
12-26-2007, 11:46 PM
Thanks.

crazefest456
12-27-2007, 01:33 AM
a unique form-- and I agree.
I wanna read more...

Pendragon
12-28-2007, 11:16 AM
a very unique form. I don't know about suicide, but I can definitely see God with head in hands thinking "Why did I do this? I could have wiped 'em out but every time a few get past and then their descendants... Will I ever learn?" Good show!

jon1jt
12-29-2007, 01:18 AM
"god committed suicide to get away"


and the little continue
with insipid perseverence

I can quote more. And you're expecting the reader to figure this one out? :rolleyes:

thechampion
12-29-2007, 09:44 PM
its pretty easy. The title tells the entire point. God did commit suicide. Think about it. Humanity like an infinite number of monkeys creates. Listen plus who said poetry had to be accessible? I take it you have never ever read any Dickinson?