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Scube
12-19-2007, 09:12 AM
I could not ascertain the stars

Nor comprehend the seas,

Too broad the span of molecules

For narrow minds are these.


I cannot say how Robins know

To punctual nests return

When Spring has scarce put up her lace

And donned her emerald gown.


Yet this I know: should Nature fade

Into a memory,

Our Love will comprehend all time

And grasp eternity!

genoveva
12-21-2007, 01:24 AM
Scube, why don't you try re-writing this poem in sonnet form?

aashishameya
12-21-2007, 02:18 AM
its good poem and have potential to become great like "love's philosophy by Shelly"