Lost

[Remarkable]

LOST


I saw the men getting into the darkness
But I did not see them getting out
I saw the men getting lost
But I did not see them find salvation
I saw the sun blackening the world
And the moon getting closer
I saw the stars falling in flames
And I knew, I just knew,
That this was the coming to an end…


(This was in a moment of inspiration.I'd really appreciate your rewiews,to see if I really can do it.)

[SleepyWitch]

not overwhelming but not too bad for a start, either :)

[Remarkable]

I know it's not overhelming,the thing is I found this in the archives of my computer,so that means I have written in at least a couple of years ago.I don't seem to find inspiration or time anymore.Anyway,that proves to me that I am better in prose...