In Winters Thrall No More

[poetslife]

I am a statue
Frozen in winters thrall
The angels cry for me
Their tears drop from heaven
Only to turn into frozen Daggers
That plunge into my chest
where my heart should be
Standing in the depth
Of winter's loneliness
waiting for ones love
to bring the dawning of spring
to heal the wounds that were made
winter howls in rage
as another victim slips
from her paws and falls
into the majestic embrace
of passion that is Love.

[symphony]

:D winter's sooo into us!

i liked the whole poem except the last line. :)

And welcome to LitNet, Poet. ;)

[AuntShecky]

Is "Winters" possessive in the title and in the text "winters loneliness"? If so, I would put an apostrophe between the
r and s in winters.

We hope to see more of your work on the network. You will enjoy these forums, methinks.

[poetslife]

yea it is possessive. I was half asleep and a little intoxicated when i put it up. its not all the way finished yet. Thats just how far i have made it so far.