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PrinceMyshkin
12-13-2007, 04:27 PM
into my café,
his girth extended
in more directions
than I had directions.

I had a cup of espresso.
He had a bowl.

I had a croissant.
He had two.

His head was about the size
of one of my grand-children.

ampoule
12-13-2007, 05:01 PM
I'll eat your other one. :D ;)

Sweets America
12-13-2007, 05:03 PM
I owe to this poem a very nice discussion about Diane Arbus (that's her name!:D ) and the evocation of your teaching memories... I love this, when we share things like that, and when we laugh in the very middle of it because one of us has said a goofy thing. Ah, thank you Jer. :)

PrinceMyshkin
12-13-2007, 06:27 PM
I'll eat your other one. :D ;)

I am confident that you are usually a very careful reader of the poems posted here, both the surface text and the sub-text, but he had two croissants, I had ONE.

ampoule
12-13-2007, 06:33 PM
I am confident that you are usually a very careful reader of the poems posted here, both the surface text and the sub-text, but he had two croissants, I had ONE.

but you wanted two

Virgil
12-13-2007, 06:45 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: I was really in a downer this afternoon. That helped a little. Thanks. Comic poetry is tricky. You did it well.

NickAdams
12-13-2007, 07:07 PM
First I laughed, then I pondered. Very nice.

blazeofglory
12-13-2007, 09:47 PM
Something very appetizing. I hunger for things.

symphony
12-14-2007, 12:39 AM
the first stanza's hilarious :D
not more than the rest of it, though :D

crazefest456
12-14-2007, 12:58 AM
oh no! I-- *dropping her second can of coke*
:lol:
lol!