still a slave

[loulued]

slowly,
i go
and bow,
in front of my enemy.

my pride
is alone,
and forgotten

Converted?!

you believed I'll change,
you must've been insane,
i say:

love is a hate,
a hate of humanity
I refuse it
if thats the reality
and growl in my rage
as a slave of normality.



Hi, would like to have your comments good people, This one is really one of those that came drinking coffee and written to a napkin. I feel its not finished, like the end is missing. Right now it feels too informative at the end and not enough feeling.


Thank you