What do you think of my poem?

[ashleya555]

Waiting.

You moved back home, and left me here.
You told me not to wait for you.
But waiting is all I can do.
I'll wait for the next time I see y our face.
I'll wait for the next time I feel your warm embrace.
I'll wait for the next time our lips touch.
And I'll wait for the next time I hear you say those three words that mean so much.
I'll be waiting.

[manny2]

i like this poem a lot, its something a lot of people can relate to... i no iv had that feeling before!!
very descriptive.. looking forward to reading more of your poems

[abs2sweet]

hey, im new here, so this is the first poem I read. It's good, short but sweet. I write poems that are pretty short as well. Ill share them sometime.

[thescholar]

I like this poem, it reminds me of a long-lost friend... well done, and keep it coming.