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mazHur
12-08-2007, 09:30 AM
Bowl Of Love
by mazHur

Like a divine bowl
I shall hold if I will,
that gorgeous visage of yours,
by its rosy cheeks,
firmly in my caressing hands
and drink, like a thirsty moth,
all the nectar of your resident love
in your seething soul and body.

crazefest456
12-12-2007, 01:56 AM
This reminds me of that poem by Victor Hugo, "More Strong Than Time":
it starts off with "SINCE I have set my lips to your full cup, my sweet,"

mazHur
12-12-2007, 02:06 AM
thanks, Fest, for your valued comments and enlightening me about Hugo's poem with similar theme. I will definitely read that.

You see your comments are so valuable that without them it's rather impossible for poets or writers to to improve

good luck!