Pinot Vino

[ampoule]

Pinot Vino

Pinot Vino...Noir, that is,
came highly recommended,
I begged a tiny sip of his,
it tasted, oh so splendid.

Vitis vinifera grapes,
Voluptuous perfume,
Swirling round my tongue, it sates,
my senses with its bloom.

Sweet the edge, I fell in love,
it made my blood run hot,
Still the punch was powerful,
Forget it, I cannot.

Some say it's sex inside a glass,
makes some souls wax poetic,
So even if I'm alone, alas,
I certainly won't regret it.

amp, December Seventh, TwoThousandSeven

[Virgil]

:lol: Now Amp, you've hit on a subject close to my heart. Well, done. Comic poems are not easy.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Pinot Vino

Pinot Vino...Noir, that is,
came highly recommended,
I begged a tiny sip of his,
it tasted, oh so splendid.

Vitis vinifera grapes,
Voluptuous perfume,
Swirling round my tongue, it sates,
my senses with its bloom.

Sweet the edge, I fell in love,
it made my blood run hot,
Still the punch was powerful,
Forget it, I cannot.

Some say it's sex inside a glass,
makes some souls wax poetic,
So even if I'm alone, alas,
I certainly won't regret it.

amp, December Seventh, TwoThousandSeven

I kind of suspected that the rumours of Dorothy Parker's death were premature. (And they said you had no sense of humour!)

But - hey! you've got one comma too many here.

[Scube]

I love a good comic poem with a clever twist. Nice! (It rhymes too!)

[ampoule]

I kind of suspected that the rumours of Dorothy Parker's death were premature. (And they said you had no sense of humour!)

But - hey! you've got one comma too many here.

:D But my darling Prince, you once told me I was good with commas. It went to my head. ;)

[jon1jt]

Pinot Noir is my favorite! And yes, even when alone, ahhh. Love it, your poem, that is.

[firefangled]

Ah, the most romantic of wines for my tastes. Very well made poem in its honor. I love, "Sweet the edge..."

The poem is also very reminiscent of Dorothy Parkers.