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amuse
12-06-2007, 05:09 PM
I miss the frost, the days of
sharp ice all around,
and bathing in the albedo
of your love
as your warmth
responded to my reticence

I miss sipping from
diamond straws
now that gravel
turns its face from my feet
upon their return.

I would drink through an oat straw
if I could, if it would bring you back to me.

I remember thinking when I saw
one in your hand that it was a silly thing...
you, you my friend, with
dirt on your knuckles

And fool's gold sparkling
all around you while the
sun shone down.

PrinceMyshkin
12-06-2007, 05:30 PM
The title alone put me in a good mood, and then the poem continues in that same modest, unpretentious manner with images that seem to create themselves right on the screen. Thanks.

amuse
12-07-2007, 11:21 PM
:)
You're welcome.