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JTParreira
12-06-2007, 01:32 PM
The moon inside of a wash tub.

The leaves hit the wind.

J.T.Parreira
blazeofglory
07-20-2008, 08:09 PM
Ideas compressed into these lines tell much more than what they seem. The reader must have a mind to understated deeply, of course a sensitive mind.
PrinceMyshkin
07-21-2008, 07:28 AM
How you provoke the reader to wonder!
blazeofglory
07-23-2008, 08:49 PM
The moon inside of a wash tub.

The leaves hit the wind.

J.T.Parreira

So much said in a few words, that is the test of poetry.