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[MarleyMorris]

I still wake up, wishing i was still with you,
everytime i wake up or go to sleep...
my heart brakes cause i know longer have u anymore...
theses feelings that i am feeling i shouldnt be
feeling cause u dont dersive me,
u hurt me
i feel stupid everytime i think about you the way i do...
i wish i could just STOP..
people tell me in time...i will heal but i dont see that happen..
i wanna tell u how i am feeling but cant cause friends mean
more to me then anything...
u are the one that makes my heart stop
just by hearing ur name
or seeing you....
people thinks i am crazy cause i want u back

i am always afraid that one day i am going to wake up
and i wont remember anything about the passed
i am afraid that i am going to get hurt like really bad
and wont remember all the good times we did share
i dont want to forget all the good people i have met
or the times when
we made love
the kisses
the hugs
the car rides
the times we skiped school together

your always on my mind...
it sucks i cant even see u.....
but i understand
i am gald u are happy with her
someone needs to make u happy..
even tho i did everything in my power for you.....
all's i know is ur the one i love
the one that i think about everyday.....
i just have to say why am i the one
THAT HAS TO HURT!!! :flare:

[blazeofglory]

This poem seems to have sprung from the bottom of the heart and here pangs of pains are expressed so beautifully and intensely. It is so lively, vital or life-like it has welled up from your own experiences and indeed they are very beautiful.

I am really moved and absorbed in this poem. It is spontaneous and poignant. The perfect outpouring of what someone undergoes when aggrieved.