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aashishameya
12-04-2007, 04:40 AM
You said- I want to eat it
My body is too hungry
Let’s have it
I said-I want to drink it
My soul is too thirsty
Let’s have it

jon1jt
12-04-2007, 04:44 AM
Now that's a cool poem that got me to laugh out loud. Well done, my friend. And with brevity here, there's wit too.

Pretty^Athens
12-04-2007, 06:02 AM
I jist love it.. it's well exoressed and well written, ;ove your idea about sex that's a mixture of feelings and lusts. well done!

aashishameya
12-05-2007, 03:14 AM
thanks for comments, i think sex is the one of the thing which leads us to happiness if done rightly

Chortle
12-05-2007, 02:07 PM
and here i stand in agreement, well played, well played