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[CdnReader]

Oops. Title should be...

Belief

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Does belief tie me to this place
in the hopes of finding
more?

Or does belief lift me up in
the darkness of the night
when the cold seeps in
around the edges of my loneliness,
leaving me
bereft?

Please bring me a candle
and a flame to light my path,
for the way to you
is hidden.

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cdn/1dec07
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[Granny5]

b or belief...either way it's beautiful and moving.

[PrinceMyshkin]

b or belief...either way it's beautiful and moving.

I agree... that the first 9 lines are!

[Granny5]

I agree... that the first 9 lines are!

You should read the last 4 lines. They're great, too!

[PrinceMyshkin]

You should read the last 4 lines. They're great, too!

Sez who? Some people don't need to have everything ess pee e el el e dee out!

[Granny5]

so of us like to have it spelled out for us...that way we don't have to think.

[firefangled]

Oops. Title should be...

Belief

.

Does belief tie me to this place
in the hopes of finding
more?

Or does belief lift me up in
the darkness of the night
when the cold seeps in
around the edges of my loneliness,
leaving me
bereft?

Please bring me a candle
and a flame to light my path,
for the way to you
is hidden.

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cdn/1dec07
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Cdn, I love the way this is written with an expression of faith and then the unknown that seems to shadow even the deepest faith in anything.

I think this needs the plea in the last four lines.

[dibyendra]

Nice and moving Cdn !

I loved especially the following lines :



Or does belief lift me up in
the darkness of the night
when the cold seeps in
around the edges of my loneliness,
leaving me
bereft?

Please bring me a candle
and a flame to light my path

[CdnReader]

Granny, Prince, Firefangled, and Dibyendra.... Thanks so much for your comments. :)