Shrinks and Hides

[wingwizard]

just while i'm running the bath...

The search for the great tear,
Downright,
Ups and lefts.

They are then, to enrobe a world in greying fen.

The sadness nascent (my evanescence),
Of the eye (left and right).

I climb inside, shrinks and hides.

[wingwizard]

...no?
ah well
was a good bath

[blazeofglory]

just while i'm running the bath...

The search for the great tear,
Downright,
Ups and lefts.

They are then, to enrobe a world in greying fen.

The sadness nascent (my evanescence),
Of the eye (left and right).

I climb inside, shrinks and hides.

Of course there are really good and interesting lines.